Kingoffrogs

Kingoffrogs

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Kingoffrogs
Kingoffrogs
3 months ago
Replied to Faraam_Knight

I totally agree with what you are saying, and I love the criticism. because it reminds me you guys take this seriously. however, you missed subtle clues I left in the earlier chapters, Arrakis will be split. it was always Damon's intention to do so. If you think about it, he needed this situation with the emperor to occur. And if he conquered Arrakis early on, he would be constantly attacked by the other great houses, despite how much wealth he has and how much control he has over Spice. He is a new power that is only proving its strength. And the other great houses will test him, and he does not want that for the fremen people. he realizes that most fremen are fanatics of the Lisan Al Gaib so he does what he thinks is best and allows for house Atreides to come to Arrakis. and he wants Paul to control the fanatics, whereas he controls the other side. There will not be one emperor; there will be two in the whole galaxy. This is why Damon doesn't use his Atreides name and why he has not married. Damon is more powerful than Paul, and his children will be vastly different from Paul's. we also saw an increase in power, and though I don't show it, he is omniscient. He claims to know all long before the creation of the sisterhood. and he claims to be the one who orchestrated its creation. and I mentioned he is older by billions of years. He is a being that has been waiting to be born.

Kingoffrogs
Kingoffrogs
3 months ago
Replied to Muhammad_Ali_3814

if you read the book, the harkonnens used atomics to find maudib

As the soldier fell, he pounced on another; in the air, you could hear the hum of ornithopters, and in them were Harkonnen soldiers who were about to shoot Atomics down on the battlefield, not caring for their soldiers. 

SON OF DUNE

SON OF DUNE

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Kingoffrogs
Kingoffrogs
3 months ago
Replied to Luke_Mills_9974

actually i have to reread the book I wrote but i am thinking some time this week

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Kingoffrogs
3 months ago
Replied to Metalloid

he just needed a purpose

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Kingoffrogs
Kingoffrogs
6 months ago
Replied to Avarath123

Yeah but not from his house he it’s more of a thing he liked to do

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Kingoffrogs
Kingoffrogs
7 months ago
Replied to PIG_DEMON

thats what it supposed to be, but it anchors him to who he is, he likes to do things that people dont do. which is who he is. A ridiculous person

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Kingoffrogs
Kingoffrogs
7 months ago
Replied to SirZed

It is showing the difference between him and his father

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Kingoffrogs
7 months ago
Replied to cosmicRider

He has gold

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Kingoffrogs
7 months ago
Replied to Rowan_Urdaneta

Honestly I am working on it right now so that way you guys can have a better story

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Kingoffrogs
7 months ago
Replied to Rowan_Urdaneta

And I love that you did that. And I know you are not hating

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    Let me make it clear, dune is not my creation. What you're about to read is a piece of fan fiction, a work inspired by the original. The book Dune introduces us to the main character, Paul Atreides. The bene gesserit instructed his mother to have a daughter, but she disobeyed the reverend's mother and decided to have a boy. Lady Jessica was meant to give birth to Paul and only Paul, but one day, she lost control of her body; she was able to choose the gender of Paul, but in her womb, a second child was formed, and he was called Damon Atreides. Lady Jessica had given birth to two boys, but on the day the twins were born, they were put into a room to let Lady Jessica rest. but not minutes after this happened, one of the children, Damon, vanished. Duke Leto searched for his youngest son Damon but was not found, and no evidence of kidnapping was shown. he pressed himself into work and focused on Paul to become the next duke after him. The question was, where is Damon Atreides? The answer is that the baby was transported to planet Arrakis and raised by the freemen people. they called him the young worm

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