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Where are his so-called manners? And isn't he supposed to be non-aggressive? He literally crushed someone's limbs to the brink of death, all while smiling like a typical psychotic Chinese killer lol.

"It's a Chinese novel, what did you expect?... at least the translation is relatively acceptable. I read the original, and man, it was like ocular cancer."

You are my damn hero, your work is truly admirable, man. Personally, I passionately hate grammar and nationalism along with strange Chinese ideas, and the worst part is that I’m forced to read Chinese fanfics because they write a ton of them, and they are really long. That’s why I suffer through Chinese writing, where every other dialogue mentions something about jade or the magnificent and perfect 'celestial empire.' Honestly, I hate nationalism or any kind of political discussion or ideas in stories. Obviously, we’re reading about a fictional world, but they bring their garbage into it. That’s why I value your work, great translator. Saving me from such an overwhelming read deserves all my respect, and I hope you keep up the good work.

Gyutaro:..😨

"Wow... this protagonist doesn't really have the typical hero attitude, does he? I mean, it would be great to bring some hope to that dark world..."

Hello, Mr. Author:I love the story, and I think it's right for you to take your time updating the chapters. However, I find myself in the uncomfortable position of pointing out something I consider negative: the filler chapters. I don't understand why they keep appearing. This one, for example, is completely useless. No one is interested in the intrigues or details beyond the surface of the Kabane world. The characters from that world don't generate any interest, and this chapter, in particular, focuses on the corruption of a random character that no one cares about, and the problem is resolved absurdly quickly.I believe a mini-arc could have been explored where the One Piece characters interact with people from another world or how they engage with different universes. If the theme is corruption, I think it's right to resolve it quickly, but here, it was just one character acting corruptly, which seems unlikely considering how humans generally behave. It would have been more interesting to create a chapter, or at least part of one, where Imu notices or considers this problem, and stricter controls are implemented to prevent future cases of corruption. This way, we could avoid these filler chapters that no one likes.

Hello, Mr. Author:I love the story, and I think it's right for you to take your time updating the chapters. However, I find myself in the uncomfortable position of pointing out something I consider negative: the filler chapters. I don't understand why they keep appearing. This one, for example, is completely useless. No one is interested in the intrigues or details beyond the surface of the Kabane world. The characters from that world don't generate any interest, and this chapter, in particular, focuses on the corruption of a random character that no one cares about, and the problem is resolved absurdly quickly.I believe a mini-arc could have been explored where the One Piece characters interact with people from another world or how they engage with different universes. If the theme is corruption, I think it's right to resolve it quickly, but here, it was just one character acting corruptly, which seems unlikely considering how humans generally behave. It would have been more interesting to create a chapter, or at least part of one, where Imu notices or considers this problem, and stricter controls are implemented to prevent future cases of corruption. This way, we could avoid these filler chapters that no one likes.

"Fascinating, a truly spectacular duel. It was about time the protagonist experienced a defeat; after all, defeat is also a necessary teacher. I look forward to seeing how Hoshino deals with her first loss. I hope that Emiya's spiritual core can be repaired—it seemed really messed up."