iam enjoying it so far. i dont feel it being to rushed definitely not a slow novel but its not that rushed at least for me its good.
EXODIA
The new clan master.... Exo What?!
Eastern · _EverSmile
Iam finding it hard to follow but so far its good.
The heavenly dao, the order of the world, couldn't endure the devil's invasion, it responded with punishment in the form of lightning that struck all corners of the world, killing many demons. However, their numbers were too great to be eradicated through mere force alone. Realizing this, the heavenly dao focused its wrath on the traitor and ordered an unprecedented, devastating punishment of lightning strikes that annihilated the entire city.
Eastern · ChaosMajesty
that hurt...
His skin had cracked and his feet were bleeding.
Fantasy · Han_Jue_Fan
Descriptions are top-notch making the readers immersed into the story while still allowing the readers imagination to be creative. Story development is good and the MC is smart and most importantly, new and unique ideas. Well done. Keep up the good work. [img=update] also i chose 1
a great job, over all a nice story a bit rushed, but i do rather you keep the current pace than to add fillars we are already sick of those. [img=recommend]
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A nice fanfiction a nice start at least and the author seems motivated. Give some reviews and like to encourage him to continue. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Hunter X Hunter Fanfiction : Hunter’s Odyssey
Anime & Comics · FENNECANIMATION