Maggie_01

Unfortunately, I arrived hopeful and left disappointed. I know it's fast paced, but I didn't think it would be a report. without any emotion, the mc arrives at the location as if he were cutting vegetables, in a completely direct way, without any suspense and then quickly returns to the same location, without arousing any emotion in the reader. Instead of wanting to keep reading, you just want to skip it all and go straight to the end. as the protagonist, which makes the story very monotonous to read.