Manthan_Jain_1233

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2022-11-12 入りました Global
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Manthan_Jain_1233
1 months ago
Commented

Uh why is sorcerer supreme a loli? And her name is Yao right. Mordo is the dude who became evil later.

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Manthan_Jain_1233
2 months ago
Commented

Wow the twist and turns in the story are just WOW

Manthan_Jain_1233
Manthan_Jain_1233
2 months ago
Commented

Tftc it's really great work

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Manthan_Jain_1233
3 months ago
Commented

Something was bugging me for the past few chapters and I just realised what... although it's pointless to say now but WHERE ARE THOSE BULLET PROOF JACKETS!? SHE HAS ONE ARMOUR CHEST UNOPENED,IF I REMEMBER RIGHT,AS WELL

Manthan_Jain_1233
Manthan_Jain_1233
3 months ago
Commented

Dude he didn't get existential crisis when he received a system which is definitely given by some cosmic power but he is shocked to find out that he is in the world he knew?

Manthan_Jain_1233
Manthan_Jain_1233
7 months ago
Replied to TheBoredWriter69

The author wrote some other Marvel fan fiction similar to this could you please tell me the name?

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Manthan_Jain_1233
1 years ago
Posted

The ratings are scam. Okay so I have read 10 chapters only and yet Mc can solo an entire fire kingdoms base in a village. At level 10 he is a metal bending master and in 3 week he taught his whole village i.e. 'those who can learn' Metal bending and built a damned wall of metal. With 16 stat in his phisical stat he could life 500kg which mind you is the maximum weight captain America can lift.There are too many inconsistencies to even count, at this point i can say that it's not even wish fulfillment anymore maybe it could get better but I can't bear it any longer.

Manthan_Jain_1233
Manthan_Jain_1233
1 years ago
Commented

When will more chapters be uploaded here?

Manthan_Jain_1233
Manthan_Jain_1233
1 years ago
Replied to hlh987655321

He got the skrull powers he don't need to create any serum now. With just dna he can get all the powers

Manthan_Jain_1233
Manthan_Jain_1233
1 years ago
Commented

Hello author it is very fun read. Now about the idea I say you bring a character with system in the novel and he fights against tony. In almost all the fanfiction with system the guy becomes arrogant and trashes everyone around.in this 8 year of time skip you can give him enough cheats to content with this super tony. Someone teaching manners to the system owner is long due