saleh_darijani

good has threesome this novel?! -------------------‐------------------------------------‐-----------------------------------------------‐-------------------------------

hi, I want write criticism about this book dear athure, 1- mc has very point even if he has system, he can easily achieve his goal without effort,for example he has divine martial art book without effort you think it is divine book not grow on trees 2-story pass fast. other character easily make feel to mc. you can write about conquer woman as reader i want you write about his problems and effort him for resolve them. finally I want see more chapter 😉

dear athure I hope continue write this story and finish it.

my English language is not good so excuses me for unable understand meaning sentence. your novel has a new story i like it. i have some suggestion( they are just suggestions and you can refuse them) 1)don't make big harem (30wife is good) 2)devlop daily life of mc and his wife or action I enjoyed read this novel and wait fie more chaptee