GlaringError

So for some days now, with more and more new readers coming I have noticed a pattern. They are continuously saying my mc and other characters are too young for the story. Technically they are.. But I could not have emphasised enough in earlier chapters that this world is different and an average intelligence of a human child is just 5-10 while these are people with over 30-35 int stat. I don’t really a see a problem, but honestly I don’t really think age is that big a deal.. But clearly it’s an issue for many new readers.. and as I said It honestly doesn’t matter much to me.. Just that my system and level growth was perfect for this age but guess few years won’t make much difference.. So the thing I want all of your help with is to help make me decide this.. Do I make changes in mc and main characters ages..? Or we just go on as we do..? As I said, it’s nothing much to me.. if it helps my reader relate more sure.. I will read all 200+ chapters and edit them.. like this comment if you want the changes be done.. and reply with +1 if you are against it.. we have a week.. since a time skip is coming.. before new arc.. So do let me know.. Love you all.. *** New changes if we do it : - Damian age 9 currently >> 11 after increase - Might make Lucian and Damian’s age gape a little closer.. - Sam, Einar, Alex all young characters will match Damian’s age (Close by with +-1 or 2) - Damian will be 7, not 5 when he leaves his family. First chapter.

When he killed Threadripper - Ch.141 Payback 9

Will upload as auxiliary soon For now - Unranked Leader Terror Lord King Emperor

My readers on scribblehub, that’s where I used to write smut.. Won’t say which (Too embarrassed of that.. >.<) Actually it’s funny, how I started this.. I made money with patreon of my smut on schb.. but when I bought pc things with that monie, my family was like ‘where u get so much monie from..?’ So as an excuse to justify my income I wrote non-nsfw book on WebNovel (this one).. to say my family that I am author and this is my book that makes me money and it ended up making more than the smut… I was like.. well.. turns out I am not just good for smut.. I got so motivated I drafted like next 500 chapter story line in my first month of writing, that was crazy.. I am still following half of what I cooked that night though and regularly study my notes whenever I need a direction for my story..

I hired an editor, he is gonna do it this weekend. Only advice I have is to fake it till you make it, keep writing no matter how bad it is. Choose a topic you are passionate about, build a habit to do it every single day. Writing smut is best way to learn, you don’t need much knowledge and people will read it plus give you advice paragraph by paragraph as to what you should improve on..