okay! Now I'm totally hooked, I mean really hooked.
I'm beginning to have an affinity with Ryan 🤝
well written almost effortlessly in carefully crafted plot. There is more room for drama and conflict, and that's what I'm looking out for in subsequent chapters.🤗
clearly these are powerful antagonistic predators at logger heads.... I think "rasped or hissed" instead of "whispered" sounds more manacing.
"I thought we've already agreed on this" Aldo whispered leaning forward.
Teen · Deborah_13
perhaps.... The telephone on the desk rang.....
The telephone on his desk rang out, he picked the call and said
Teen · Deborah_13
The telephone rang. He picked the call, and said; "yes" sorry, just an opinion 😊
The telephone on his desk rang out, he picked the call and said
Teen · Deborah_13
that's a real class room😅
They quickly arranged their tables and chairs and sat down quietly like nothing ever happened.
Teen · Deborah_13
Flawless unique style. I didn't have headaches squinting my eyes, and tossing sentences and phrases to make out meaning life lots of books here. I am looking forward to see more conflict. Oh, romance is definitely my thing. A mafia romance, all the more to my taste. I'm hooked, and want to know how this story is gonna end.[img=recommend]
You passed the test I have for you author, your cliff hangers are just so dope, I'm aching for more.💝🤓
Truth: I did gotten myself huddled in the first few pages, but once I Slash my way through, the story sucked me in. there is enough suspenseful conflict to keep you turning those pages.... Trust me the author seem to be a master of his craft as the story advanced, and to me that's a great thing. This deserve to be in your library 🤗
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Fantasy · Amera_Mee