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i read it and all ii ill say is the author is certainly new i guess in writing, the story started off nicely but developed into some kind of to be dark themed novel which was not meant to be so developed like that. dark themed novel need to be wrote a little differently but anyways. The lore is too much to take in and someway along the line you will start to feel pissed and think "was it really necessary here?". The mc character development is somewhat forced i guess imo where many deaths were not needed , its not always have be a death to grow in character. Many deaths in the story will feel bland and unnecessary. The different world connecting drama and all the timeline things made it even more complex ( like i said , unnecessary and forced lore).I just hope author learns from this novel and write a far good one in future. PS: To me it can be said the novel tried to get in the general trend of reincarnating as a villain thing but in process of trying to differentiate itself from others it lost its own charm and became a mess

I Am The Game's Villain

Fantasy · NihilRuler

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the deaths at this point seem like wasteful now even if iits or the plot. deaths need to be justified but here its all a death parade sighs

ch 221 [First Game] [Epilogue] [2]

I Am The Game's Villain

Fantasy · NihilRuler

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plic reference

"Over the years, you have done a really good job. The company is doing great under your command, and I have decided to keep you as the CEO of the Black Jay Records, which is now under the banner of my Black Forest Group."

Villain: The Play of Destiny

Fantasy · FateDevilAce

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3mth

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you alive bro?

"You think you know me, Mother? You don't." He coldly said and stepped forward, capturing her lips.

Villain: The Play of Destiny

Fantasy · FateDevilAce

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3mth

Replied to KyoIshigami

ryueen be saying "islam walikum"

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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3mth

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you stupid , she is purposely doing it to give them free points while having sakayanagi in last place while also giving mental damage to kei

'Karuizawa Kei,' 'Hirata Yōsuke'

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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3mth

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she is a lost cause

Like, unpleasant emotions are clinging around me.

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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3mth

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its his first experience with a yandere

Something unpleasant clung to Ryuuen's hand holding the umbrella, and then spread to his whole body.

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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3mth

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ok i love her

"Let her wait. It's her duty as a girlfriend to patiently wait for her man to come back home."

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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3mth

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no cap sudo has developed so much

"I'm telling you; I'm going to study hard in the future. Up until now, it's been for someone else, but from today on, I'm going to give it my all for myself. My immediate goal is to get to Hirata's level."

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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ayoooooo sussss

"I don't think we should do that. I have Ryūen in my room."

Classroom Of The Elite Year 2

Realistic · KyoIshigami

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