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Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to Blue_creeper

Sorry, I ran into some issues and couldn't continue.but I really was disrespectful to readers by not disclosing anything. However, I'm working on a new fanfic, and I should post it only when everything is complete, to avoid dropping it. The new fanfic is going to be a little different, trying to explore the wizarding world and the underworld when not at Hogwarts.

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to JohnWicksPencil

If I'm going to make a system like the one I mentioned. It's pretty simple, it would work more like a self-analysis skill. He could monitor everything he learned and thus make tests of how to improve certain points. Anyway, thanks for the time, I have most of the beginning ready, after a review and improving some points, maybe I will ask you to read it if you are interested

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to JohnWicksPencil

At first my desire was to make a system that would only tell you how your level of mastery in spells is. As if the system was only there to understand where to improve. It would be something more useful just in the beginning. Then maybe I could evolve to do more things. The point is that this system, it would be the protagonist himself who would do a magic using the logic of the systems, to help him.

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to JohnWicksPencil

Then I was thinking of writing about a reincarnated protagonist but without memories of the books (due to something in the plot or not). Thus, he would still see the magic through another vision, but he would have no plot information. Another thing I was thinking about while writing an outline, was whether or not I would insert a System into the story, I see that many people like that in stories. Though I have to say it's hard to nerf systems from the little I've written...

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to JohnWicksPencil

I understood. Well, I wanted to make sure the protagonist doesn't have the memories from the books, so he can live and make friends naturally. Knowing the plot type forces you to make a decision about whether or not to change the canon. I want him to interfere in the story, but as something natural, as the moment a new look at the canon choices comes up, things change even if subtly.

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to JohnWicksPencil

I'm writing a new fanfic, but I only want to post it when it's ready, or almost. A quick doubt would it be better for the protagonist to have his memories and remember the original plot of the books, or if well written, could he be a character without the memories? I'm in doubt if for fanfic, character without memories would be good to read.What do you think ?

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to JohnWicksPencil

and you stayed and waited, thanks for that

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to Ghuus

Obrigado pelo comentário, sou brasileiro sim. Bom saber que outros BR estão lendo minha fanfic também. Qualquer sugestão é sempre bem-vinda.

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to Soal_San

loved

Hello, this was a difficult chapter to write. I had a hard time putting into words my idea of the three ways to use magic. If you understood what I wanted to convey and have better words to explain each one of them, could you comment in the paragraph with your explanation? I would appreciate it.

Harry Potter: Heir to Ancient Magic

Harry Potter: Heir to Ancient Magic

Book&Literature · Guryon

Guryon
Guryon
1 years ago
Replied to Krypton71

I couldn't add new tags, or I don't know how to do it or it's a bug, I can never put a new one.... I'll try again later

  • Harry Potter: Heir to Ancient Magic original

    Harry Potter: Heir to Ancient Magic

    Book&Literature HARRYPOTTER

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    [A Harry Potter fanfiction] Adam is someone who has the memories of his other life, now he is in the world of Harry Potter, and he is the heir of an ancient and wealthy family. His quest for power and affinity for magic will intertwine with the plot of the main story. Will he go against Dumbledore? Will you discover the deepest secrets of ancient magic? What do he and Merlin have in common? Follow Adam as he chases his own dreams and creates his legend across the Wizarding world. LEGAL NOTICE: I don't own any characters other than my OCs. The cover photo is not mine either.

    43 Chs 7.8k お気に入り

  • Harry Potter : Ancient Magic original

    Harry Potter : Ancient Magic

    Book&Literature HARRYPOTTER

    [A Harry Potter fanfiction] Adam is someone who possesses the memories of his other life, now he is in the world of Harry Potter, and is the heir to an ancient and wealthy family. His quest for power and affinity with magic will intertwine with the plot of the main story. Will he go against dumbledore? Unravel the ancient secrets of Hogwarts? Follow Adam as he pursues his own dreams and influence in the world. DISCLAIMER : I do not own any characters other than my OCs. The cover photo is not mine either.

    10 Chs 340 お気に入り