Thank you for the support 😊. I'll try to continue writing whenever I can.
Thanks. If there's anything you want to point out for me to improve my writing on, then that'd be great. [img=recommend]
Thanks 😊
Thank you for the advice, I'll be keeping them in mind. I want to give the mc some backstory, but I don't know how to include them yet. The chapters so far are pretty long and a bit pulled out, but I'm also not sure how to compress it. I'll try to keep improving as I go further into writing. I appreciate your review. Thanks.
I think I get what you meant now. But the word "things" here is used in a more abstract and general sense. It doesn't carry the same derogatory or dehumanizing connotation as when referring to individuals directly as "things." It's a way to categorize friends and family as important aspects or elements of life. So I don't think I'll be editing this. Sorry if you still feel offended.
I don't really get what's offensive about calling living beings as 'thing'. But all right, since it's supposedly offensive, what word do you suggest I change it with?
How so? Please elaborate.
Would love to, but I have an exam at the end of this month. Unfortunately. [img=Speechless]
Is it too fast-paced?
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original My Wives Are Beautiful Monster Girls
A young man woke up to find himself transmigrated into a world where every creature is able to use magic to manipulate the elements. Not knowing why he was brought to this world, he tries to find the reason and survive in this new reality. _________ No NTR No Yuri Harem _________ This is my first time writing a book so I hope you enjoy.18 Chs 190 お気に入り
If there are anything I should improve my writing on, please tell me. Or maybe there are any plot holes in the story.
My Wives Are Beautiful Monster Girls
Fantasy · HannazRolynn