Daoisto0M3es

ah shit here we go again. C.J.

drama level was encreased on another level. litle bit anoyed

ok, so its gonna be 5-10 chapters about takumas suffering about that. ok she is died. takuma will "grow up" or become kakashi v.2. but how she died, and takumas "pain" in perfect time. not in first meet, or thinkin about kon after fight. memory came only when takuma ready to kill kon. those timings and "how" rikku died left me with a bad taste

👍 keep going. But you need make your chapters bigger.

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Just don't let her sit on your shoulders when you in battle. And better finish red skull fast than talk with him and watch what he gonna do.

What next? Virus from resident evil or vampires? Maybe mister sinister will arrive to help red skull? After him we will see apocalypse? Why mc fast enough to kick air and fly but not fast enough to kill red skull and wolverine?

Now i get it. This ff are CHINESE!!!

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