Shari_Roberts

I love the action unfolding so exciting

I like it I'll stick with it [img=recommend]

Ok ok, I like it so far. We are off to a great start

Duuuude I was so eager to read the next chapter [img=update]

what was the code

[img=Your move] okaaay whew lol

So excited for the nextt chapter your work is amazing! But , Rqmk, I do wanna point out this chapter had a couple of paragraphs that were repeated . It was the section were we describe the holy night Dean

this chapter needs some editing. There's a lot of repeated sentences and phrases from text read earlier

things are starting to unfold nicely