My dude I love the different perspectives of other characters as it gives more flavor to the story but there's a time and place to put it in especially when the story is in the very climax of an arc or something. It takes the reader out of the experience. Everyone was waiting for the ball to drop and when it finally did, you decide to blue ball the audience by not giving the aftereffects of Aqua getting stabbed and instead give an equivalent to a flashback. The Miyako and Hikaru interludes were nice but just add them AFTER everyone's reaction to Aqua getting stabbed. Honestly this just reminds me of the Naruto Shippuden anime where things are finally getting good, they decide to drop filler episodes (flashbacks) in the middle of the climax.
But I think when Miyako's chapter is around and I see a comment about filler chapters and too many side characters chapter. Of course, there are comments that this is good, world building and stuff. But I know I messed up… since at that point, I already wrote several chapters ahead and I feel like this will come to be honest.
That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol
Anime & Comics · RazackCh
If anyone wants to read this note that there is NTR in this story. Author tries to make a better version of Rudy but cucks him when his love interest gets pregnant by his father. The story had potential but the Author tries to follow the OG story and makes it somehow worse. Honestly I suggest you just read the OG Mushoku Tensei if you haven't already rather than this trash. OG has a near irredeemable MC but tries his best to become a better person and gets rewarded if he does and gets punished if he reverts. This story rewards a normal otaku OC being a good person by cucking him.
One of the best stories I've read in a while.
Finally a danganronpa fic that's good. Hope it doesn't stop updating.
This be the most unrealistic thing in this story so far only because the teachers here are using common sense. If this happened in the real world, teachers would suspend the bullied person straight away because of 'eScALatING'.
The rumors of how Yuji had beaten up the three bullies from class 2-4 spread like water around the school, but the teenager decided not to do anything about it. To him, this was more positive than negative, because at worst, it would attract other bullies to try to test him, but at best, it would simply keep any delinquents from messing with him.
Path to Strength
Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
MC:
"I know, I even startle myself at my own genius sometimes."
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
C'mon Lexy you're better than this. Didn't you say it's not worth it to research on him anymore? You're just putting urself on a sunk cost fallacy.
I continued my research on Black Bolt, trying to find out what made him tick. It simply irritated me to no conceivable end that his DNA was nigh impossible to read or break, one impossibly more complex than Kryptonian DNA, a fact that made no scientific sense.
DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
Story is good and I really like the premise so far. First fic I read with Yoriichi as the main character out of all the people. Really like how it progresses.
so it begins
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That Time I got Reincarnated as Son of an Idol
Anime & Comics · RazackCh