DawnandMorning

Excellent! The story goes right to the top of conflict. The chapter full of tension is begun. Great chapter to start the conflict, Author. Go and continue, please ...!

A new style of describing the story, compile the climbing technical to face the hurricane. Really like the Author's way to situate the setting when Prayoga, Rangga and Bisma start facing the tornado. It looks real and live. It helps me a lot to understand how to climb and the tools used in climbing. Go ahead, Author. You are my favorite one.