So much potential,but there's gotta be a catch. There always is.. and not just for the clone either
A very enjoyable novel, I'm looking forward to more 😁
I do enjoy the story, but some things ruin it for me. Maybe I'm just not your target audience, but I think even side characters should be more than 2D. As I have gotten further along in the story I'm starting to get more disappointed with the direction it is taking.. 1.First off I don't like Harem. some might enjoy it more, but I think it lowers the quality of the story I'm reading as it usually causes me to eventually drop the story. 2. I understand that he came back for his child which i found to be very touching, but you would think after 5000 years he would understand things around him more. 3. I'm at chapter 120 and I'm getting pretty tired of the constant face slapping and lack of world building. I like a good world building and this story with I think a lot of potential is being to sidetracked with cliches....
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xp
yep
thx
many thoughts
definitely an interesting character
probably because there's only so much resin to potentially supercharge his physique
Elves did not impress him so much, outside of their immortality. Devils could control demons, which was kind of cool, he supposed. Angels… well, he wasn't certain what was special about angels yet. There had to be more, right?
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher