Reuben_Kotila_1137

Reuben_Kotila_1137

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2022-04-18 入りました Global
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Reuben_Kotila_1137
1 days ago
Commented

The way you are working with a future Tony who was happily married to Pepper a harem doesn't make sense, however I think Tony trying to flirt with Black Widow and tiring to make sure she doesn't have to sacrifice herself is a great idea

Reuben_Kotila_1137
Reuben_Kotila_1137
1 days ago
Commented

+1

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
12 days ago
Commented

my friend you need to look into The Record of the Loddoss War and Rune Knight anime. Both are prime fantasy worlds with awesome magic

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
12 days ago
Commented

yes I mean if I am transported to HP universes I will take it all

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
13 days ago
Commented

+1

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
2 months ago
Commented

I get that you lost your muse. Personally I thought you were too fast paced , but I did like the over all concept of the story

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
4 months ago
Commented

That sounds awesome 😎, I think Baki smashing through Ragnarok would be great

What are your guys' thoughts if I mix in more lower tiered stories due to the growing chaos of these mixed worlds? For example, bringing in stories like History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi to broaden the view of martial arts?

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
Reuben_Kotila_1137
5 months ago
Commented

yes 👍

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Reuben_Kotila_1137
5 months ago
Posted

The storyline as a whole was good. There were some spelling and grammar errors, but not enough to be off putting

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