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I'm ok for premium*

Jian pulls out UNO reverse card, making Hao investigate Ying and punishing her instead.

Actually a Cool God, destroyed the MC's stupid reason about hating the game, Gigachad God.

Nice, Dragging his affiliates through the mud with him, Ooo hope that Lion Beast is seized for Wang Jian would be a nice pet

Ah yes, Write more, Ignore those assignments, Procrastinate! (seriously though, stop writing and do your essays!)

Intercepting the plot before it even began, nice!

Hmm, I don't know about the "Damien probably just forgot things" play. If I remember correctly, The Zadkiels offspring are known to have awakened early and with great talent, Danielle not minding it is a plot hole in my opinion. (previous chapter) Anyway those are just my thoughts and TFTC

I find the fight scenes... weird? I guess you could call this the "Tell not show" where the author only tells the scenes/story not show it to the readers, I couldn't picture the demon or the stake and wires, lastly the fight itself was something hard to imagine, it felt lacking with not much of an oomph, only telling what Bell did. Still enjoyed it though, especially, the family interactions, though maybe develop their characters more so we can feel their interaction and relationship more deeply. Hope you continue to improve, author.

A nice touch of tragedy and character development material for Damien, the part where he says I didn't think of saving people, only the artifact was great, shows how light he thinks about others lives, and barely cares for some of his family members (shown by how he almost abandoned his sister). Hope he changes and be better a person maybe not a hero/saint but at least he would keep his family safe even if he has to become cruel sometimes.