YorzaKaril

YorzaKaril

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2022-03-10 入りました Global
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YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
5 days ago
Posted

I was excited at first but the translation somewhat messes up the grammar and makes it difficult to read fluidly.

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
1 months ago
Posted

Nothing wrong with it, and I’ll keep reading it but I honestly preferred the first version author released.

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YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
2 months ago
Posted

Can honestly be summarized to a “meh”. Nothing really eye catching about it. A few things that are contradicting (ex: supposed to be set in a Chinese cultivation world, and the dude MC finds says something about Arthur being a weird name but has a friend named Carlos?).

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
3 months ago
Posted

As of 18 chapters, this has got to be, in my opinion, the best ASOIAF/HoD fanfic I have EVER read.

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
3 months ago
Replied to YorzaKaril

What do you mean? I rated it like that because that’s how I feel. I don’t like it so I rated it a 2. That’s how reviews work… If you want to rate it, then do that. I am someone who doesn’t like this type of gore stuff and wrote the review to warn people who are like me.

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
4 months ago
Posted

Very strong caution for anyone who wants to read: it’s not just dark but VERY dark. Not for those with a light stomach..

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
4 months ago
Posted

It’s decent. I would reccomend as a read you aren’t too invested in. I thought it was a pretty cool concept but his appearance seemingly changing for every template he get to match the character is a little weird.

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
5 months ago
Posted

As of 6 chapters, it’s not bad. A good casual read for most people. Could use better tagging so it shows up in the “Harry potter” tag.

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
5 months ago
Posted

It’s okay. A good casual read. But I can’t stand some characters being named “Ser Elon Musk” or “Ser Ed Sheeran”.

YorzaKaril
YorzaKaril
5 months ago
Commented

These names…. Why

"Thank you for your service to our house Sers'. May I ask Ser Harrion Snow and Ser Ed Shereen if you are willing to swear your oath to me?"

HOTD- Family above All

HOTD- Family above All

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