here not hear
"Hear it is sir." The lady gestured. "Transfer or Card… Sir?" The lady asked respectfully.
Urban · AndyZero
so if it takes 90,000 and he had 200,000 shouldn't it be 180,000 not 110,000? what happened to that 70,000?
Ken looked at his phone as he saw the alert. "One hundred and ten dollars has been transferred into your account!" Ken exclaimed. "What?! This is for real." He jumped off his bed and celebrate his achievements.
Urban · AndyZero
question properly spelled
Yuuto straightened, a slight smile spreading on his lips, his voice ringing out through the hall. "But if you all qustion his strength, very well, then. Perhaps a demonstration is in order."
Fantasy · Zurbluris
son-in-law, not son and law
Morgana caught her daughter, not letting her drop to the cold training ground stone. Picking her up into a princess carry. She carried her daughter through the house passing her husband and son and law in the process
Fantasy · Graedeint
least not last
"I'm not going to attack you, because I don't like attacking weak people, nor am I going to report you to the Guild, but if you repeat the same behavior, whether with me or someone else, being expelled from the Guild will be the last of your problems."
Fantasy · Corbeu
again wrong gender he not her
After a few minutes they arrived at the mansion, her father wasn't there, he had left for a meeting with the King, he and a few other nobles from the Capital had been called.
Fantasy · Corbeu
a few times you've put she in reference to darious
wrong gender author
what not wait
"Then wait why is he doing here?"
Fantasy · Zurbluris
so looked it up tires is American where tyres is British. every says America is backwards
The white milk truck's tyres screeched as it collided with the wall of the building, finally coming to a halt. Its entire front side was now covered with a vivid crimson colour, a shocking and surreal sight that left the onlookers momentarily frozen in disbelief.
Lackey's Seducing Survival Odyssey
Fantasy · AbiLIon