*That's
"What's odd," Johnathan replied, his tone uncertain.
Urban · Julius_180_9
Thank you. I'll do my best to address those issues next volume
I'm glad you like even though you're not done yet
I possess this ability to a degree
"He can harden his body. Any part of it."
Fantasy · BelieverOne
Interrupter and interloper are kind of synonyms, no?
As he brought down his fist to land the final blow, someone grabbed Fólórunsó by the wrist. He turned to see who this interloper was and was met by the imposing figure of the Patriarch of the Immortalis family. His hair was a deeper auburn than his son's, almost red and his eyes were a vibrant blue. His face did not betray his age, making him seem as though he was untouched by time. He was dressed in a nightshirt with a gold laced cape draped over his shoulder and maroon trousers and a pair of slippers. His presence was imposing, exuding a lethal aura even though he was smiling. Even the Revel around him behaved in an odd way as it was being bent by him.
Sci-fi · KABEPthecreator
So much is happening in so little time, and though that isn't necessarily a bad thing, it is still worth noting. Okay read though.
この本は削除されました。
I have an issue with the characterisations here but it's not too big of an issue to subtract from the quality of the chapter by a huge amount. Overall, it's another good chapter.
この本は削除されました。
This chapter needs some editing but overall, pretty good
この本は削除されました。
Okay
"I thought I said you shouldn't hand me fan mail?" Sola said.
Sci-fi · KABEPthecreator
Interested to see where this goes
How I Became The Richest Man in My Country
Urban · Julius_180_9