Stardust_46

Early Review!! Amazing !! Your work is so fascinating !! Is it really your first work? !! So awesome!! How do you do it? From introducing the place to the characters and their conversations all that felt too real!! And Damn! ! I love how that girl despite being nervous and shy maintains her professional throughout the conversation with the boys!! Your vocabulary is amazing!! By any chance is English your first language? I love how your characters make me feel emotions similar to real life. ..It just feels amazing to see someone developing slowly and steadily!!😌😌Especially when you have started from a good point.. Keep on going!! And yeah I love your character design too😍❤!!

Woahh!!! I will try not to!!!😂

The moment I read that earth was destroyed, I felt sad about it. But then when I came to know that there are still 50,000 people alive, I felt a wave of relief. There is something in your characters that you may not have realized!! It's Aura. I can feel their aura even through the screen. The right amount of tension, puzzles, conflicts and solutions make your story a great piece of work!! Plz keep writing it.. And I would like to give a suggestion.. You can slow down your update frequency. There is an invisible rule in this world.." The more you can't get something, the more you want or desire it". Keep your updates at a moderate pace, like do only one chapter update a day, or five chapters update a week. This will help you attract readers attention and curiosity about 'What Happened Next?'. If you feel offended, then I apologize for it. But work is seriously worth it!!!!

Anyway thank you for suggestions!! I appreciate it!😊

Thank You so much for your review!! I am very grateful that you think so highly of my novel!!🤗🤗

I admit, I was truly impressed by the female lead. The way she carries herself and they way she handles situations with ease is what kept me here all the time. I was surprised about detail and vividness of every characters present in your story. The plot has a moderate pace, not too fast and not too slow, unlike me, which I am very well aware of😌. The first thing I liked in your story was how the butler despite being from a noble background and despite looking down on slaves, is impressed by the eloquence of the female lead. It is like, although he despises the poor, he won't go as far as to deliberately go over to cause trouble for them. All the best for her future journey and I hope she is always able to accept different types of siruations calmly by analyzing them over and over again, to gain special or hidden insights. Also, the AI, if only it could have a personality of its own. How I would love to be her system and help her in reasoning mysteries😍. Thank you so much for hard work. Your work is a masterpiece😎😎..