I understand she means coming back to Arthur, but I think it would be better for her to say something different than mansion. I at first thought she meant staying at the x mansion.
In the car, Jean kissed Arthur on the cheek: "When classes are over, I'm going back to the mansion."
Anime & Comics · Supreme_Dragon_God
As they pondered this, everyone's gaze shifted to Shimura Danzo, who had an enigmatic smile while touching his chin.
Anime & Comics · Nobody2NoBody
You keep saying he isn’t Baku a girl now?
Did Sensei-kun shower before we had sex?
Anime & Comics · XanaxODD
I’ll say it every time it come up in fics but teleportation like in start trek I would never use. I’m the firm believer that teleportation like that would kill the original person and a clone would be made on the other end with all the same memory so no one would know it’s a clone. So your not actually teleporting your just killing yourself and making a copy on the other end.
He looked at the teleporter in front of him and said,
Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze
It’s the wardrobe for Narnia.
Description: A wardrobe connected to an unknown magical secret realm. Open it, and you can enter a mysterious magical kingdom/Realm.
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
I would say for a summon summon grayfia from Highschool Dxd to replace his dying house elf. I
What the plot for them.
I mean I’m not saying it’s not interesting to read but story wise I feel it’s a little over the top and not that feasible. You could do other things during the events or even have the mc have eri participate in the mini events they have between the second and third event. It’s was just a little cring to me that when the mc shows up with eri everyone was just like, “oh? Ok this is fine.” Like it’s normal what he was doing. I’m not tryin go to put down your ideas and enjoy what your writing. I just wanted to give my little two cents and a little constructive criticism.
Wasn’t it the other way around and ash gave his handkerchief to serena?
Reincarnation of Ash: A Pokémon Tale
Anime & Comics · sssachin098