Hey, author, I've seen the reply you gave. That guy probably reported it after feeling embarrassed hahaha.
Don't listen to that guy, author. Create your OWN story. There's no need for you to listen to a guy who haven't even read that far as of yet. To be honest, your other novel is already good. The only mistake you had is probably listening to these kind of people. Your story is PEAK!
Hello
"Helloooooooooooooooooo...…Hellooooooooooooo" I heard a voice, it was a similar voice. This scenario it is giving me a sense of Déjà vu.
False Hero
Fantasy · fahad_nawaz
Guess it's finally time for those to get re-edited.
Starting with a lie, Ending with a truth. It had been really a roller coaster journey.
'Efforts never betray you'
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
My man found another target XD
I peek at the door to see inside. There are two people in there. The girl who I heard and another one. I don't need to guess who it is, he must be her boyfriend. To think that they have the nerve and the courage to do it on the first day of the school year. I'm seriously amazed that I even wanted to give them a clap.
Stealing Spree
Urban · Dyrem
Then days passed and the kisses levelled up to more. But since there's a lack of sex education at that time, we never get passed kissing and touching. I sucked her tongue regularly though. Especially during mornings, I often pull her out of anyone's sight. The excitement of that grew into me but well, I soon grew bored and let her go. But even though I stopped seeking opportunities to get her, it was she who started longing for me. Not that I mind. We continued that relationship until we graduated, without anyone knowing but us. And during that time, I didn't stop at one. I also got the most popular girl in school and the smartest girl. Thinking about it now really filled me in nostalgia.
Stealing Spree
Urban · Dyrem
If I remember correctly, it started back in the 5th grade. I saw the Class Hunk of that year confess to someone. The girl isn't even that beautiful and I still haven't grown in that department yet, still hairless. But still, I felt an annoying itch inside me to go and steal the girl from him. He might have been the most handsome in class but that did not faze me. It only took me a week to get the girl to fall for me and right after that, I stole her first kiss. And err she also stole my first kiss back then but that's not the point. Anyway, I did all of that without him knowing and without them breaking up during it.
Stealing Spree
Urban · Dyrem
My dude's dream is to become this guy...
His contributions extended further as he aided Junior in the confrontation against the demoness, the Black Market leader and the true mastermind steering the "Nameless Group." Even though this endeavor ultimately claimed his life, Leon succeeded in realizing his long-cherished aspiration, ascending to the echelons of the "Hero of Justice" he had yearned to embody.
I'll Be The Hero That I Want To Be
Fantasy · FalseFace
Here it was
I'll Be The Hero That I Want To Be
Fantasy · FalseFace