Caboose1812

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Caboose1812
Caboose1812
3 months ago
Commented

It’s just out. Over means you want a response.over and out is like asking for a response and then saying shut up.

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Marvel: A Symbiote's Journey

Marvel: A Symbiote's Journey

Movies · BananaPancke

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
8 months ago
Commented

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Caboose1812
Caboose1812
8 months ago
Commented

Pretty sure it’s in not and. Then say something like now that I have some working capital it’s time to gain more prestige and make the name of “name” August.

But all and all I got rich and it was time to start getting ready to spread Afrul's name and my power.

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

TV · Justin_Swart

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
8 months ago
Commented

Say something like I improved my sleight if hand skills to where I was able to steal daggers from waist belts and rings from fingers. Maybe add a story of how he did it instead of just saying he did. something like I was panhandling when a wealthy man slapped my hands away and as he did so I lifted the ring from his finger.

It has been a very successful week of pickpocketing I even got so good I started taking daggers out of their wait belts or rings from their hands.

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

TV · Justin_Swart

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
8 months ago
Commented

Also just use grammerly. The free version will catch all these mistakes much better than spell check.

As I was thinking of future planes I made a net thief suit from all the clothes I stole I look like a proper thief now because it's just civilian clothes.

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

TV · Justin_Swart

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
8 months ago
Commented

Plans*

As I was thinking of future planes I made a net thief suit from all the clothes I stole I look like a proper thief now because it's just civilian clothes.

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

Reborn in game of thrones as a dark lord

TV · Justin_Swart

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
8 months ago
Commented

Si

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
10 months ago
Commented

+1

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
10 months ago
Commented

Honestly for plot tossing her ragnars way kinda sounds like the move. would help create conflict.

Caboose1812
Caboose1812
1 years ago
Posted

Very much a lemons and harem novel, but I still enjoy the plot and the overall story.