@CoughBlood feed my addiction lol, are you working on anything else besides this novel? I love the stuff a lot and can't wait for the next chapters to come out
was really nice reading it, can't wait for more, feel the progression of the upgrades takes away from the stride and character progression a little when it's so fast-paced, but overall, a good read! can't wait for more
dang, poor fly mark. yo, what's with the treat halfway through the week! got me reading at work. thanks!
dang, "another one" down goes the eagle man. world will slowly picking our guy apart as it gets to the final countdown, can't wait to see what the primal ape people have in store for Mark and the group. thanks for the release!
lol glad to see reol'ran interactions happening more often
"You destroyed the immediate threat, but there is more to do," she said. "We don't know what kind of World we are in, even. Go, don't waste time."
Mind Demon's Path of Domination
Fantasy · CoughBlood
wait a little confused here, so the demon slave still in the demon world that was hiding is now dead right?
He had entered his World Space, and he had killed the Dungeon Demon slave of his. It was a sacrifice he was a bit reluctant to make, but nothing too bothering if it resulted in him gaining a new ability.
Mind Demon's Path of Domination
Fantasy · CoughBlood
let's go! new chapter, gained enlightenment while also losing one's self and memory, doesn't this mean the eagle t3 guy is also a Maverick since he killed the upper demons and his father who was also a maverick?
the whole arc was utterly useless, pointless, without giving anything up. I'd have to say, instead of being a slave, sunny has incredible bad luck for someone supposedly fated. nothing is ever genuine and kept in character for our guy, it flips switches to his character so often that you start to hate it because it sounds like the author looked at discord and retraced his steps to appease those who didn't agree with his process for sunny. now sunny honestly has no backbone and just makes cringe dumb mistakes or choices and your left wondering why. 🤔 the author should go back to the first arc and just delete it, that way we wouldn't have known about a sunny that could of been and we'd be be used to the husk of an empty shell that is now our sunny. that being said, this river arc in its entirety could of been skipped and no one would have missed a thing, he could of even saved us the pain and just said sunny went into the nightmare and came out a Saint and it would of been x5 better than the trash we got
[End of Part Two: Keeper of Truths.]
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I'm also curious about the demon world play in here, I think this is the third or second time the mission goals reference the love of the demon worlds will for giving a conquered world will to it. I wonder when or if mark will eventually go this route and what the benefits of it are, or atleast see another demon who gave it to the demon world will to see what benefits they got from it! is it a viable option in countering the rivers bad luck?? so many options
was as fire as you thought the arc would be? the author cooked it so l9ng the ribeye came out well done. if he took it off the fire back when it was getting good it would of been great
Creating New Memories Together
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree