Potato_killer

Potato_killer

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2021-11-20 入りました Antarctica
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Potato_killer
Potato_killer
1 days ago
Posted

It honestly becomes a drag to read just filler about the mc catching pokemon for like 40 chapters straight and you just know these pokemon will never actually become relevant to the story. By chapter 800 nothing has happened other then the small major arcs that make up like 200 chapters. The rest are just filler and unnecessary side-quests that dont lead anywhere. Even the training stuff that the mc does and the whole academy arc just becomes irrelevant.

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
5 days ago
Posted

Honestly, a fairly good book, but there became more and more plot holes the further i went. And the mc that the story focused on in the start, kinda just became a side character. There are just a lot of action scenes that are kinda vague, and the mage knowlegde is power thing at the start just went poof, and suddenly he has a shit ton of spells and the chip is like mentioned here and there(its analysing stuff). Never really being used. The stat sheets are also gone, and just in general the story degraded as it progressed.

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
10 days ago
Commented

Is leon still solidifying and optimizing spells through the system?

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
12 days ago
Commented

Hmm, hoping leon will get some body development techniques that he can adapt to suit him

Moreover, as the concentration of the energy was far higher than the concentration of elemental spells, these kinds of mid-ranged knight battle technique not only had powerful anti-defense properties, they were even able to completely negate or annihilate the spells of casters while they were in midair. This was where the name Spellbreaker Knight came from!

The Magical Path Of The Wizard With A Biological Chip

The Magical Path Of The Wizard With A Biological Chip

Fantasy · WOODD

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
23 days ago
Commented

Tf is with the jumps

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
23 days ago
Commented

This chapter was weird, doble posts and skips without any warning and the deal with his analysis in the library not having any end/we didnt get told what happend.

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
23 days ago
Commented

This brood felt like a combo of starcraft infested and tyranids. But for some reason it really reminded me of the infested from warframe.

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
23 days ago
Commented

1.5 meters, you say….. Very tall indeed.

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Space Age: Echoes of Eternity

Space Age: Echoes of Eternity

Sci-fi · smol_benis

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
26 days ago
Commented

I mean… Like bruh you used a phone like a few chapters ago.

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Rise of The Plague Doctor!

Rise of The Plague Doctor!

Horror · dotQ

Potato_killer
Potato_killer
26 days ago
Commented

Lots of pronoun mixing in this chapter