Author the MC beside the power of magneto,does have he the potential of magneto?
Hello author, the story is good but I noticed that in the last chapter the dialog between the characters is become less and less present and the story is becoming more descriptive. In this way I fell less interest in what is happening and the rhythm of the story is too fast, for example we have no idea of what the MC acquired during his journey, thing that could have been descripted in 2 o 3 chapter
If he will be transform in to a devil with a devil piece, wiil he be able to use devil magic? Or at the last become a devil?
The concept of the story in interesting, is a new way to approach to the world of HP, and the quality of the story till now, ch 18,is good. But the trial of the demons semms to easy, ok he did just the last the demon but the trials are to easy compared to the what he get.
Hello author, it's been 9 months will you publish a new chapter, or you dropped the story ?
Author, the MC have a limit of the number of quirk he can have like AFO or not? Because if he have a limit the story can be more interesting, in this way he can just steal various quirk but he wold choose the quirk that work better together
I have a question , from what I know niether saiki o mob can control the 100% of their power, and for this they put a limiter on their self, mob by controlling his emotion and saiki with the tools created by his brother, so how can the MC use their power without going out of control? For exemple he used his power for levitating a book, but with his low control how can uses his power with such control?
Until now, 3 chapters, the story is good, but the fact that him in 2 days found quirk that combines perfectly with his situation is a little of, but besides that the story is very good
Author will there be a new chapter? If not could you say it
Author, if I am not wrong you never showed when the MC understood to be in a MarvelXHp, because in the first chapter he thought of be reincarnated in another family in the past
Harry Potter : Bloodraven
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