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1 years ago
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If you can't even get money without the help of the interface, then I'm sure that 'someone' wouldn't be too bummed out when you actually die. They'll just get someone better I guess.

It wouldn't make sense for anyone who brought me here to go to so much trouble, only for them to sit back and watch as I died of starvation.

Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.

Movies · Saintbarbido

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1 years ago
Replied to Aim_MASTER

Yup, very big inspiration. In fact, for the first few chapter, it's basically a copy. I made this because I recently read fake red and I really felt it's a shame that it got cancelled.

Faced with growing chaos, he must rise to the challenge. Armed with nothing but the costume and his own courage, Andreas must fill in for his vanished hero. He may be a counterfeit, a fake Spiderman devoid of any superpowers, but the city needs a Spiderman.

Actor (Oshi no Ko Fanfic)

Actor (Oshi no Ko Fanfic)

Anime & Comics · SUS

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1 years ago
Replied to DespairHope

Yup, a ver big inspiration from Spiderman Fake Red. I just felt it's a shame for it to end early because the manag got cancelled due to insufficient sales.

It's time for the unlikely hero to save this city, proving that sometimes, it's not the superpowers that make the hero, but the heart underneath the suit.

Actor (Oshi no Ko Fanfic)

Actor (Oshi no Ko Fanfic)

Anime & Comics · SUS

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1 years ago
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Writing Quality(3 star)- It's readable, and there are only a few grammar mistakes. I would have given it a four star but sometimes, the author gives very long info dumps that isn't necessary and his descriptions really can't make you visualize well because it's has little descriptions. I also don't like the fact that he uses Shadow Spiderman instead of Spider Noir, which I'm sure he received comments about but the fact he didn't change it shows his laziness.Story Development(2 star)- I personally didn't like the development, the fact he revealed that all of them are just media in his world and the fact that even though he is an OC, he's barely contributing to the plot. It's something I personally don't like. Character Design(2 star): Since this is a fanfic, the character design should have been pretty high but the way the author writes the character feels one dimensional, so I made it lower. Plus, I don't really like the MC. I don't have problems with weak, cowardly, edgy, overpowered, or cool protagonists, what I do care about though is a bland and uninteresting character. That's what this MC is, he's very bland, his personality is not explored, we don't even know his motivations that much. Update Stability(Five Star): Uploads everydayWorld background(Five star): This is a fanfic, so I think it's perfect. Though the world itself in this fanfic isn't explored that much.

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1 years ago
Commented

Do you really have to say she's seductive? She's a minor and the fact you mention seductive implies that Mark think she's seductive because even though it's from a third POV, it's still focuses on Mark's thoughts.

Gwen fluttered her gorgeous eyes and opened her seductive lips once again as she said using her soothing voice, "You said you were a Martian researcher, is it possible to land on Mars on your world already?" (A/N: Yes. I just did that. Fight me if you can)

Spider-Verse: Another Spider-Man

Spider-Verse: Another Spider-Man

Anime & Comics · Baph0met

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1 years ago
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Oh, then he is somewhat emo. He is certainly gloomy and edgy, but his whole personality is not based around being it, he does show moments of compassion and empathy such as dancing for Kana. The manga is a different story though.

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1 years ago
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Manipulating his sister is canon tho? If you're trying to comment about how Aqua seems too emo in my fanfic, that's certainly true, because I didn't show his other side's yet, but him being like that toward Ruby is not something I did, it's canon.

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1 years ago
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Nope, he isn't. He's more human, there just wasn't enough chapters yet for me to show it yet.

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1 years ago
Replied to definetlyundead

Thanks, I feel really flattered and embarrassed by your compliment 😊

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1 years ago
Replied to LulzLowKey

Well, he does go in a different path in the next few chapters. You can read those before deciding if you want to drop it.

  • Actor (Oshi no Ko Fanfic) original

    Actor (Oshi no Ko Fanfic)

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION TRAGEDY ANIME OSHI NO KO

    4.23

    Lies are the only way to keep the love he so desperately craves. The real him is not enough, but as long as he keeps up the act, maybe they'll continue to love him. It's worth it, even if it means sacrificing his true self. Love is worth any lie, any act, any cost. ________________________________________________________________ Oshi no ko Fanfic. I don't own any of the characters except my OC.

    46 Chs 2.2k お気に入り

  • The Fake Spider(Spiderman Fanfic)(Eventually Spider-verse fanfic) original

    The Fake Spider(Spiderman Fanfic)(Eventually Spider-verse fanfic)

    Anime & Comics ACTION MARVEL ORDINARY RIGHTEOUS NOCHEATS SPIDERMAN SPIDER MAN

    In the bustling, dynamic streets of New York City, a singular figure swings between the towering skyscrapers - an emblem of hope and justice known as Spiderman. The city's residents adore their friendly neighborhood hero, their cheers echoing in his wake. On the flip side, life for Andreas, a high school misfit, couldn't be more different. His academic struggles paint his report cards in bold red, and his social life is as barren as a desert. Andreas's world takes a seismic shift when he stumbles upon Spiderman's discarded costume in the murky seclusion of a forgotten alleyway. Donning the suit was meant to be a playful gesture, a temporary escape from his life and the chance to feel closer to his idol. But when the city's beacon of hope, the real Spiderman, mysteriously vanishes, the mantle of responsibility threatens to weigh heavily on Andreas' ordinary shoulder. Faced with growing chaos, he must rise to the challenge. Armed with nothing but the costume and his own courage, Andreas must fill in for his vanished hero. He may be a counterfeit, a fake Spiderman devoid of any superpowers, but the city needs a Spiderman. It's time for the unlikely hero to save this city, proving that sometimes, it's not the superpowers that make the hero, but the heart underneath the suit. _________ *Big Disclaimer: For people who only like edgy overpowered MCs, this novel isn't for you. As you can probably guess, Andreas won't be overpowered. He won't be special, he's ordinary. No genius intellect to make himself weapons, so he won't be a tech Spiderman. Though that doesn't mean he'll never get tech, I'm just saying he won't make his own. Also, this is a major inspiration from Spiderman: Fake Red, a manga by Yusuke Osawa. In fact, most of the first chapters will most likely be a direct rip-off. But don't worry, I's going to branch out though as more chapters go by. And yes, he'll eventually go to Into the Spiderverse.*

    8 Chs 130 お気に入り

  • MHA: Avatar The Last Airbender original

    MHA: Avatar The Last Airbender

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION

    Waking up in a dark place, Maxwell meets a Deity that gives him a second chance at life with a condition. --------------------------------------------- Cover not mine, it's from the internet. --------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: All the characters in this novel belong to the author, and I'm just using them to write my own story. If the cover creator wants me to remove it, comment on it in one of the chapters. --------------------------------------------- *If you are reading this novel and expecting the MC to be OP on the first chapter and be perfect. This novel is not for you, I want to make the MC have flaws and not make him too overpowered when Canon starts, so he may not be the strongest student in Class 1-A. But don't worry, in the future, he will eventually overpower all of them. He will also make mistakes that aren't just there for the plot and will actually have a big impact on future chapters because of his inexperience. So, I suggest for you to stop reading this if you don't want to see events like this. (Spoiler ahead just to remind you) Even though he is supposed to kill someone, he is a morally good person who doesn't like seeing innocent people get hurt so he won't try to use them in his scheme. But if his life is in danger, he will not care about saving someone. You will see chapters where MC is a coward since he doesn't want to become branded as a villain. Don't worry though since later in the story, he will become less fearless and more confident in himself, and break some rules.

    9 Chs 305 お気に入り