Enjoying the story so far
This is so true
A lot of knowledge, which you thought you had fully grasped during the learning process, often brings new and different insights during the teaching process.
Fantasy · Bodhisattva Hammer
The quality of the writing has vastly diminished. It used to be a fun and funny story, now it’s just power ups and low effort battles …
Oh my gosh this is so funny!!
Yellow Ox remained brute and crude with its actions. It trampled on Zuo Jun's head four times. This time, it was two times more than the last time.
Eastern · Chen Dong
Oh my god, I just spit out my coffee
Yellow Ox unhurriedly approached Zuo Jun. It gave him a meticulous scrutiny, then suddenly, it turned on its trusty old hooves and forcibly trampled the man's head.
Eastern · Chen Dong
?????
Du You had already decided to risk it. Mandrake is a type of traditional Chinese medicine used as an anesthetic, and the potency of its sedative effect is very powerful. Too much can be lethal. Mandrake also goes by another name: Mandrake. This is something he remembered from his days of curiosity.
Eastern · Stars Fall
That was actually pretty funny
"Dogsh*t, this isn't something an ordinary human can do!" Lumian cursed and lay on the bed.
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Here is my feedback, don’t do other perspectives (third person etc) it ruins the pacing of the story. Good novels don’t do that. Keep up with regular posts and story will do well. Another thing, don’t let things ramp up too quickly. I feel like story has already massively increased in pace
Aaaaand we are back to Mongrol being weaver
"Well… for starters, was Weaver a man or a woman?"
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Somehow better and worse than original attribute … good balance. Good job author on actually starting with a semblance of balance
Effect: You will not feel any negative emotions; damage you deal with "frost" elements permanently increased by 20%; you cannot be killed by damage with "frost" elements.
Super Righteous Player
ACG · Not praying for ten strings