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xFexxious
xFexxious
5 days ago
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This feels way to much ChatGPT and has no heart to it you should do a full rewrite with your own words, even a crappy writer with horrible grammar and tons of plot holes is better than this soulless read.

The letter was dispatched with urgency, and Aryan awaited the British response with bated breath. The world watched as India, under Aryan's leadership, took bold steps to secure its place on the global stage. The journey was arduous, but with unwavering resolve and the support of his people, Aryan was confident that India would rise to greatness, free from the shadows of its colonial past.

Marvel: Reborn in 20th century India

Marvel: Reborn in 20th century India

Anime & Comics · MJ_0422

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xFexxious
15 days ago
Commented

Had me laughing LMAO

Author's Note: Did you like it? I hope so. I had to rewrite this chapter because I wasn't happy with how it was. Anyway, I'll see you in a week or two when I have another world finished.

Multiversal Babysitter

Multiversal Babysitter

Anime & Comics · SalveYing

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xFexxious
24 days ago
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Diana shot him a sharp look, her lips pressing into a pout. "Not jealous! I just... don't trust her. She gives off that vibe, you know? Like she's always two steps ahead, and I don't want you getting wrapped up in something shady!"

Super Template System In Marvel and Beyond

Super Template System In Marvel and Beyond

Movies · FantasyLi

xFexxious
xFexxious
25 days ago
Commented

Continue this is a really good read but if you decide to rewrite I will not be willing to restart reading this a second time I’m looking for new chapters of this story not a new story or a reworded repeat of what I already read.

1️⃣ Continue the fanfic as it is

Marvel: Infinite Potential

Marvel: Infinite Potential

Anime & Comics · Wruthor

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xFexxious
27 days ago
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First, I threw a flashbang grenade into the chamber. The sudden burst of light and sound disoriented the Basilisk, forcing it to rear back in confusion. Using the precious seconds I had gained, I took out my AWP sniper rifle, toggled on the AOE Damage feature, and aimed for its eyes.

World Hopping With Gacha

World Hopping With Gacha

Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_

xFexxious
xFexxious
27 days ago
Replied to ZephurosStormheart

You ever heard of thermal vision? Night vision? Or anything like that… using things like that wouldn’t even let you see the skin let alone the eyes.

First, I threw a flashbang grenade into the chamber. The sudden burst of light and sound disoriented the Basilisk, forcing it to rear back in confusion. Using the precious seconds I had gained, I took out my AWP sniper rifle, toggled on the AOE Damage feature, and aimed for its eyes.

World Hopping With Gacha

World Hopping With Gacha

Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_

xFexxious
xFexxious
27 days ago
Commented

Because he is most knowledgeable about this time period ofc

Business was steady despite my limited availability. Hogwarts didn't mean my operations had to stop. I was here to train myself, not play the hero. I had no interest in Quirrell, Voldemort, or even Harry Potter's story. Once I graduated, I was planning to dip out of the wizarding world entirely. My focus was simple: self-improvement and survival.

World Hopping With Gacha

World Hopping With Gacha

Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_

xFexxious
xFexxious
27 days ago
Commented

System restraining his abilities and weakening him kinda sucks clark was super smart and had a enhanced brain which made him able to hold back naturally he just didnt use his abilities to their full potential - I feel like a different route would’ve been better but still you do you it looks good it’s just that because the way this looks in makes me as a reader feel like the system and whoever is behind it seem like a bad person/future villain or antagonist.

[Acknowledged. Initializing training protocols. Please proceed with caution as you explore these new abilities.]

I was transmigrated into little Clark Kent (DC Superman Fanfiction)

I was transmigrated into little Clark Kent (DC Superman Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · Apollo_77

xFexxious
xFexxious
1 months ago
Replied to Ignus

It’s probably the reason they’re illegally hunted this is already known.

For example, he once ate some dragon liver from Hagrid, and afterward, he felt like the magic in his body had become more abundant. 

Harry Potter : Reincarnated as The Greatest Wizard

Harry Potter : Reincarnated as The Greatest Wizard

Book&Literature · SwordmanCarryNuke

xFexxious
xFexxious
1 months ago
Replied to batman_3_3_

Must be stressful I guess? Some weird shit Greek mythology is though…

"Hades…" she murmured, her voice weak but steady. "Their father is Atlas… I been traveling all this time, he had cursed me to never find a place to give birth, I cant do this any longer. I am going to fade, it takes so much energy to hold them from being born." She gripped my arm, her strength fading. What the hell is with Atlas fathering all of Zeus's children.

~Rebirth~

~Rebirth~

Book&Literature · Willian_Salt_5874