I will summarize this novel in two words Chinese novel. So expect stupid young master, mc acting week, pages about people talking shit or ass kissing the mc, wasted chapter of glorifying mc and lots of plot holes( like the process of awakening the writer at first half said it depends on luck too make useless suspense but later you find the principal proud of his student and that people of good back ground can ignore this rule entirely) In other words it’s novel that can only be read by turning of your brain or after heavy drinking otherwise it’s not readable.

Just one word a stupid mc letterly find a gor that can just drown him by spitting on him and tells her ever little thing. A naive and stupid mc.

Too many inner dialogue that I couldn’t handle reading it. Like the first 2 chapters are just him taking to him self zero story development. I think the writer wrote this on a whim and plan for it to be a slow burn novel.

Good book so far I hope the writer doesn’t take the easy way and start copying Chinese novel troop’s because that one way to make lose my mind. Like you don’t know how many novel I had read for only the writer to suddenly turn it into chinise novel and using evry cliché they could get the greasy hand on it.

Said the guy who’s novel is dead

English isn’t my main language so I dont give a f*ck

Oh you don’t need to tell me I dropped this shit on chap 3. It felt painful reading this wish fulfillment fantasy of 9 years old.

Dud I have something called life I am not wasting on writing a novel

Dude your literally writing a Chinese novel with system the nothing lower than that.

Talk about narcissism