Yeah I started this series without much planning, so because it's my first time writing a fanfiction I did a couple of mistakes, including how powerful he can be, so I have to somehow correct that by nerfing him. However I'm 99% sure he can only use sage mode for a couple seconds. If you know any moment where he used it more then that, you could tell me and I could check it out✌🏻
Just because he wants the metal doesn't mean he can only do that. Imagine you get into the world of marvel, wouldn't you want to experience different things and adventures? It's not like metal will run away or something, he can still get it afterwards. He has about a decade before Thanos arrives so he doesn't have to rush everything. Hope that clears it up!👍🏻
It isn't filler. It's just a sub-plot insetad of "He went to the Savage Lands, got metal and then left." I want to give my story more depth and I can achieve that by letting things happen at different places with different people. Hope you understand now!👍🏻
Qell a little backstory is important, so that the strenght of the character he will be fighting somewhat makes sense but worry not! There will soon be a longer fight!
I like that he's weak at the start but he is extremely idiotic or has no willpower at all. He wants to commit suicide because he couldn't become strong in 1 month? If he trained enough, he could become strong enough to split mountains but just because he didn't get strong enough to beat Tom in 1 month he wants to kill himself? Especially in a world where you can go from 'extremely weak' to atleast 'alright' in months(Coby). Extremely weak-willed MC in my opinion.🤨
Well, I'll think about it. Those are really good suggestions and since I want to use some characters, that are less talked about, I'll do some research and decide then. Thank you for your suggestion!
Adonis is a handsome greek god and saying "I look like a young adonis" basically just means that he is very handsome.
Ah speaking of looks I also grew a lot more handsome. *blah blah blah* very handsome *bragging bragging* well defined muscles but still slender body *more and more bragging* beautiful azure eyes that would make every woman blush *spouting some more compliments to myself* Oh and also medium long silver hair. *blah blah* I'm basically a young Adonis...
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Anime & Comics · AceTheHonoredOne
No this is based on the MCU but has some differences to it. It's basically my own Marvel Universe but based on the MCU.
Oh also don't judge characters for now. I mean come on the story is litreally just starting and you're already calling people useless, that didn't even have a chance at proving themselves.🤦🏻♂️
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Anime & Comics · AceTheHonoredOne
Where did you get the boss/subordinate relationship from? I wrote it more like a partnership, don't know how you saw it as him being the subordinate. Also SHIELD's help isn't something you decline just because you're rich. SHIELD has ressources he can use, like intelligence or technology. Just because a character is rich doesn't make him able to handle anything alone. Even Batman needs Alfred, Lucius Fox, Justice League, his sidekicks,..., to just survive sometimes.
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original Pantheon's Fall
Arthur Wayne died at the young age of 16, his dreams of a long and fulfilled life cut tragically short. But fate gave him a second chance, and he finds himself reborn in Arran, a world of dangers, political intrigue, and mystical powers. In this perilous land, ruthless politicians vie for power, and greed and corruption run rampant. Determined to seize his second chance, Arthur dreams of not just surviving, but thriving. Yet Arran's formidable abilities and devastating magic pose constant threats. Arthur must master new skills and navigate treacherous landscapes, encountering allies and enemies with their own agendas. Every step brings him closer to either a glorious destiny or a grim demise. Trust is scarce, and shadows hide unseen dangers. Join Arthur in "Pantheon's Fall," an epic tale of rebirth, resilience, and the pursuit of a life worth living. Will he overcome the challenges and secure the long, fulfilled life he yearns for? Or will Arran's struggles lead to his ultimate downfall? The answers lie within this thrilling saga. Posting daily at 1pm CET.16 Chs 9 お気に入り
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[DING! Minato Namikaze Template unlocked!] Kai gets reincarnated into the world of Marvel with a System, which let's him gain the abilities of Naruto Characters. Follow him in his path to become a true hero! PS: -First time I write a Fanfic so don't it judge too harshly! -English is not my first language therefore expect some mistakes. -There are going to be some characters and plot-lines from the comics but it's mostly going to be about the MCU. -The MC is nerfed at the start but will get OP eventually! [I don't own anything except my own character!]19 Chs 3.8k お気に入り
most mc's are orphans, so that the author doesn't have to waste time with their interaction, if they're not important in the story. Also about making it hard for the mc, it wouldn't be a fun story without conflict or would you read a story where the mc already has everything?
Pokemon: Master of tactics
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