Big_Daddy666

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2021-09-13 入りました Global
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Big_Daddy666
2 years ago
Posted

Great, the writing quality of this book is not too bad but some grammar mistakes can be seen, but the story is interesting to read, I am new to web novels but I am rooting for you!

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Big_Daddy666
2 years ago
Posted

The world-building is a little lacking I guess. And also need to work a little in The characters. But overall the book is very good and fun to read, keep it up.

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Big_Daddy666
2 years ago
Commented

Please don't reveal his identity, Author [img=faceslap]

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Big_Daddy666
2 years ago
Commented

A great starting point, I like it. [img=recommend]

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Big_Daddy666
2 years ago
Posted

Ohhh looks like the romance and heram part will begin from the next chapter. I can't wait to read more chapters.hhhh I hope it will be more amazing