Didn't read re:?
At least, that was what Ken remembered after he finished all 143 chapters of the book.
MHA: One Eye'd King
Anime & Comics · DeityOfSlumber
How about you write your own fanfic where everything is how you want it to be, or you can just read and stop complaining for no reason
"Pardon my intrusion, but the lady can have my seat; I don't find these bus seats comfortable anyways," I say softly, removing myself from my crouched position on my seat and receiving strange looks as I do.
COTE: L Lawliet In The Classroom Of The Elite
Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
W pops
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Good chapter over all. A few mistakes and inconsistencies but it should be fixed in time. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it but for now have a power stone.
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Narcissist tendencies so quick into the story...
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Very fast time skip. Maybe a bit more background information would've helped especially since he just dropped in cultivation and I think the reaction was a bit too dry. If I had spent many years building up something only for it to fall and have me start over again, even if I could feel that the foundation of the building is stronger, I would still be extremely sad.
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This came a bit too fast. Maybe you could've told us where he sat down and how he sat down to cultivate so that it's easier to visualize and it adds to the word count. Also to make this sudden act seem more realistic , at the end of the previous paragraph, you could've said that he was to weak to enter the forest and if he wanted to enter he'd have to get stronger. Then you could wrote about him going off to cultivate.
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my arms*
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You should use [These] for the system to so that the readers can properly differentiate between the system and other text.
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original The Overseer Below The Traveler
In a series of accidents and a deal gone wrong, The Overseer of the void was pulled into the timeline of a man that was wrongly killed. Making a "deal with the devil", The Overseer was given a choice to return to the Realm of Void. Join him on this journey of failure and success as we see whether he can make it back to his realm or continue on as an unintentional follower of Haruno. PS: I'm actually writing a fanfic right now and I kinda feel like spicing it up a bit even though I'm only on chapter 5. Readers will be given a choice to choose a MC to root for and see who wins at the end of this journey. lel1 Chs 21 お気に入り
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From below average to extraordinary with my cheat skill
Same with the last one...this is not mine...blah blah blah...anyways here's the synopsis ------------------------------------------------------------------- Since a long time ago, Tenjo Yuuta has always been bullied. He goes to high school while living alone at his late grandfather’s house. Although he was always met with severe bullying, he found solace during the long holiday break. During this time, while cleaning his grandfather’s house, he also decided to clean the room where his grandfather keeps the items he collected throughout his life. A room where Yuuta has never entered before. While trying to organize the items collected by his grandfather, he found a mysterious door that was seemingly cut out from the wall. Out of curiosity, he opened it. And then… P.S only one chapter a day...may get slower...idk and idc...if i like it read it and if you don't like it then dont...10 Chs 69 お気に入り
A rabid dog would be a better description if I'm imagining it right. The common dog can convey a multitude of emotions even with a stoic appearance.
Their demeanor was also different; one had a kind, amicable smile you'd expect from store employees, while the other had an excited smile reminiscent of a dog.
MHA: One Eye'd King
Anime & Comics · DeityOfSlumber