Dhruv_Rathi_7297

Here are my few moments of observation: 1. This story is too focus on Mc. It dose not spotlight sight character (not even on his brother, which in Starting it focus). 2. It is a story of twins not a single brother , Author should highlight his brother's character development 3. Story remove his strongest ability- He is an alchemist (one of the best if not best on human side and he has not use this ability since chapter 10

novel is good but story'story telling is not consistent