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Will he learn the hard fist style, or maybe a hammer as a weapon? thanks for the chapter ;)

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hidden criticism? no problem, you're an amazing writer, it's a pity that not much comes out but it's amazing, what aspect of mc is the deadly price? what will put the weight of heaven on someone's shoulders, for example on a nightmare creature? will there be cake? at the academy he will learn about cooking nightmare creatures and what? I guess that's it, there is also a scene with a board showing who has the greatest chance of survival, psychological advice, if they share the information, they should get a soul shard. I keep thinking hmmmm.... I have to use patches to stay awake because the nightmare will draw me in, and instead of sleeping to rest my mind, it's meditation, i.e. not sleep, most writers forget about it

it was an interesting fanfic, I hope there will be a next one and it will be a bit longer

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his real name is echo of the abyss, more to think about where this is going, technically his ability is gravity control, and we know that gravity can also trap photons if it is strong enough, so what is his path or legacy after "???? " because after all, divine cores have their inheritances, sunny got his when he learned to dance with shadows, so when he starts to control gravity to create the sun?? curiosity; life of the sun: collection of stardust formation, spontaneous combustion, x years, dimmed star or red giant, dimmed star or black hole or full burning into stardust, next stage of dimmed star is a dwarf.

so... I can't say anything bad yet because it's funny, interesting and the plot holds together, so I rate it: I can't wait for more :)

but you would have to report it and get permission. e.g. the guy with a stomachache because he can't control his quirk, on the other hand, the sugar guy takes candy in his pocket and that's it, there's also the metal guy, who needs to eat iron to work, or the one from the big three, he has to eat a piece of something to produce it. I don't think there should be roller skates after all

What bonuses will the God of Shadows have? the weaver unites blood and can weave, what among the shadows?

um, it would be good if it was every day, but being a writer, a GOOD writer, is difficult, if I started writing something out of boredom, I would do it too, and the idea is addictive, seriously?

I have an idea for our MC's skills: so at the beginning: as long as he has some part of his body intact, he can regenerate from it, so we can say that he has an anchored soul, then 1 out of 7, so: 1 super regeneration (soul anchor) 2 bone manipulation (you know the Kaguya clan from Naruto) 3 blood healing (I give my blood to heal others, or use it on myself to speed up regeneration, or even blood armor if you want?) 4 muscle manipulation (well, that bnha villain who creates armor out of muscles xd but our mc can compress them so it doesn't look weird xd) 5th mind's eye (as we know, you can't see mahoraga's eyes so why not, it works like a byakugan) 6 sharing the soul (there, different clans have their own heritage so... ba dum kama (naruto) can give some of his skills to others, p.s. the war clan creates a lot of these weapons, why? why? probably to strengthen the one above "faith" thank you for this weapon etc 7 I have no idea for now, maybe later when we get to this part of the story we will come up with something together XD 8 no comment let me know what you think about it

no flaw... hmmm let's start from the beginning: the gods had no flaws up to a certain point, but did they? maybe not because waver the oldest demon weaver is maybe also a god, what is the difference between gods and demons? number of cores? but the more cores, the more demonic you are, and there are these divine aspects, so what is the flaw, in my opinion the flaw is to equalize the existence of gods/demons, because in the 2nd nightmare the sunna asked what it is? replied: we are their vice. and this being was called a demon, but are demons evil? a flaw can also be the price for opposing the fate of the world, because the weaver rewards you for doing everything to make it not be as it was originally, and the stronger the flaw, the stronger the aspect = balance so no vice means no fate? or maybe this being could be the multiverse, because even though he suffered in a nightmare, let's be serious, what he had to do was survive x amount of time, and he wasn't racing with death on his back. or simply because he didn't want a flaw, it's his flaw, kai knows when someone is lying, an extra flaw, effie has to eat a lot, is it a flaw? in a sense yes, in another sense no because it is logical, the lack of a defect is simply because he has adapted to it and become resistant, or simply the world chose him to take him out of the waver's net

HORIZON technology, transformers, rick and morty, Dr. Who

at least put the name of the new fanfic here

he doesn't trust others to ride Sapphire, fine, fine. what will happen when sunny is in critical condition? let's see in the next chapter XD

I think he still has that dead body ballista

so you decided that they would meet, that's fine, but I imagine that they go into the hole as quickly as possible and run away right after and the MC is behind a wall of mud XD

so let's leave it for the end of this dream

Bro... Its your fanfic

so the question is, when the nightmare passes, will its rot become stronger? if so, only the blood that is in him or with which he infected others, when you add strong sealing + weakening = death