Thanks for the chapter
I really would like you to continue writing this story but if you find it uncomfortable to continue I would recommend that you do another one and then when you are more confident and have more experience you rewrite this story (like all my comments, use a translator)
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I thank you for having listened to my advice after all it is your story and I have no right to tell you anything about it but I appreciate that you considered it
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don't worry your story is going pretty well leaving aside the fact I already mentioned and I hope you continue to make the story as you prefer to make it
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I like the story but you focus too much on writing about the characters it takes a template from which makes it just a bit of story and the rest just information from a template character
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actually in the description it said that the original story is found with the same name in the search engine
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I'm really liking how the story is developing, although I don't like the fact that the author stops publishing chapters out of nowhere, I know he must have his reasons with him, as the concept of the story is very original, the cost is 10 times divine power compared to others makes a lot of sense since essentially the protagonist's divinity can be anything
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