Igor_Dzik

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2021-06-09 入りました Global
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Igor_Dzik
4 months ago
Posted

The story is okay, the idea is good, but there's zero knowledge of psychology, and the understanding and portrayal of the characters is even worse. I recommend working on that.

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Igor_Dzik
9 months ago
Replied to Igor_Dzik

Sorry its google translator

Igor_Dzik
Igor_Dzik
9 months ago
Commented

please, I'm not fed up with authors who just clone girls to have bigger harems with no sense other than stupid numbers and then half of the women are forgotten anyway Sorry for the mistakes, I'll translate it

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Igor_Dzik
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola