Hello Mighty Customer here! 😁 The idea for this novel is interesting but let me tell you some point that might help. 1. Keep eng grammer on mark. Give a healthy amount of First Person & Third Person POV. 2. Don't make this a Gotta Catch em all Harem 🤕 Novel. 1 or 2 love interest at most. 3. The Idea of Sandbox is already way Overpowered, So don't immediately make him a Super Duper Uber God. The sheer possibilities of Sandbox are limitless. 4. You can blend Scifi & magic genre together in this I guess. 5. Maybe you can also add different world travel element in this novel. 6. Also MOST IMPORTANT: Don't make the MC a dense, beta and a dumb idiot kind of guy. This just ruins the story and character development can hardly work here sometimes. I hope the points i made to help u don't discourage u. The idea is gr8 and i hope you can create a Gem out of this. [img=recommend]
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Fantasy · Oleanderr0
Thanx for reviewing my comment Author-san.
It could be written here "Glancing back at the list of Futuristic technology" . Just Clear and Concise. No added big words
Just a simple act of clicking "Next Page" has soo many over the top words written here.There is no need for soo many words describing simple action or thoughts done by characters.
The story premise is promising, So kudos to author on that.There is a small issue that i find daunting. It seems like the story is written using ChatGPT. There are sentences written in the story that are written with too many words.Like author inserts so many big complex words in simple sentences to increase word count and in turns it becomes irritating for me. Still i liked Author's story. Hope this helps author to improve. [img=recommend]
HONEST REVIEWS : The story premise was good at the start with MC being OP as Hell but then comes his personality with childish hero complex. I like MC with hero personality but this one is just childish and i hope it can improve. Also forced relationships are really bad even though no romantic interest has been found fully developed in this story. Small Spoiler Warning: Personally I dislike the fact that he feels to much responsible for so many people dying, when he didnt know about about that event. This scene happened more than 2 times. For the final result, I feel like this story has somethings to improve but it still has potential.
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Man this story has some Crazy good potential and I would really like if Author got to releasing more chapters ASAP [img=update]. Hopefully we get Mass Release with stable pacing of the story as it is now. [img=coins]
Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend] . Its a shame i coudnt read next chapters because of privilege setting. Now its off to waiting for a long time now. [img=update]
Wanderer makes it sound like he doesn't stay in one place. Being a High Ranked one he must not even stay with his family. God Knows how they caught him. 😁😂
Although his body had miraculously recovered due to the power of a High-Ranking Wanderer, his mother still decided to have him stay in the hospital for two more days.
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Fantasy · Elyon