It's alright my man! Errors happen to our text sometimes😄. Shoot I used to use an editing software and it left a HUGE wall of text at the end of every chapter😄 so you aren't alone. Don't let it discourage you buddy, keep pushing!👍
Very good start to the story, I'm definitely going to enjoy reading more. And on the first chapter I think you have an error with your editing software, it left a bunch of text🤣
Amazing Amazing Amazing Wording. 👏
The comfortable canopy bed he woke up on is draped with translucent woven curtains. Around the walls were picture frames with curving borders, gothic windows on thick drapery, and intricately carved furniture of ash wood and marble.
A Villain of Virtue
Fantasy · Astronoot
This is a fantastic story, I love the way the beginning is starting out. The characterization, the imagery and the writing quality are good for the story. I hope this gets more recognition
Amazing World Buildings, Great Characters, and fantastic humor quality however, the dialogue could use a little improvement. Other than that this story is great and I look forward to keep reading it.
I absolutely love this story, I'm going to enjoy the constant updates for these chapters. Keep it up man, and I hope for succsses as you continue to write this story!
Thanks for the review👍. And while the stuff I'm introducing might see random it's there for future story arcs and I'm glad you like the story🙏.
This is where I think my story is currently at. Also I'd like to add chapters will be added on here weekly rather than daily. If you have any constructive criticism or positive comments I will take them. Thanks🙏
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like the story🙏
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original Ozania Odyssey
“We share a single dream - to become legendary Warriors for the Empire of Ozania!” In the distant future, a powerful dynasty called Ozania reigns supreme in the universe, earning its place among the greatest of all time. This dynasty is home to three remarkable siblings - Navar, Miri, and Jax. United by a common goal, they aspire to follow in the footsteps of the revered Warriors of the past and leave their mark on Ozania. Now, let us embark on an extraordinary journey alongside Navar, Miri, and Jax as they set out on the grandest adventure ever known- Ozania Odyssey!94 Chs 8 お気に入り
Uh Oh, The Plot is Thickening. Seems it's time for our pal Clay to fight.
A Villain of Virtue
Fantasy · Astronoot