Naive. So Naive. How disappointing. But I guess I will add that to part of mc traits.
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Anime & Comics · Vile_Serpent
I am trying to come up with a mental image of what this looks like, but so far, it's all so....
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Anime & Comics · Vile_Serpent
Good start. I am getting neutral evil and perhaps even some fang yuan mentality vibes. I just hope that you won't disappoint.
Very fang yuan like, well done.
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Anime & Comics · Vile_Serpent
I guess I like the fact that the mc had some thought to it. Great job. But is it that simple? I wonder.
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Anime & Comics · Vile_Serpent
Almost perfected huh. Hmm, it seems a little forced that you are trying to give him some flaws. Hmm, maybe for future development or maybe you do not think an mc with complete emotional control (not emotionless but complete control) is a good character. I am curious.
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Anime & Comics · Vile_Serpent
"Huh" Never thought I'd see my own blood, it's a lot more memorizing than I thought, same with being shot, I figured he would just taze me or sum, guess I was wrong.
Anime & Comics · Nxgen_Snail_Kota
I knew it was coming, "sword-like eyebrows". It was inevitable.
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Yup, indeed. Even the Bible said that we shouldn't spare the rod and spoil the child. It is the duty of every senior to nurture their wayward juniors. Such kindness. It really warms my heart.
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Also, pretty sure effects of Compound V are random.
Of course, this chemical substance was greatly flawed. For instance, it was addictive and unstable, requiring a long period of injections for it to work.
I Have A Super USB Drive
Sci-fi · Darkness Black Bear