Hey author, love the fanfic so far. how much are you planning to change the main plot?
Someone who is supposed to be calm does not lose control of his magic when a kid they know for one day gets bullied
Nick apologized to Harry for the problems this may cause him but the boy who lived refused to hear any of it since he felt it was totally worth it. "there's not much more they can do to me that I don't already have to deal with. I'll probably just not be given dinner again , it's fine I'm used to it." Harry said with a shrug and Nick came this close to going off in anger but restrained himself. It was one thing to read about the abuse Harry suffered from in a fictional story but this was Nick's actual world now and Harry was his friend so hearing this stoked his rage.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro
if he went to a potion master he would get his mind read and killed(he has no magic to defend himself with). And not every potion master can just create a world class potion , ingredients don't just grow on trees
Nick had already figured out that he was in the world of harry potter with all the hints he's been given so far but he didn't remember the books mentioning a phenomena like this meaning that potion was likely WAY more valuable than he initially thought making him regret drinking it a little. 'One opportunity lost but I got another in exchange so no use crying over it , next is the crafting style.' Nick thought with a shrug. Carefully reaching over Nick grabbed the ticket with the roulette wheel drawn on it and taking a deep breath ripped it in two.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro
But nick was the one angry
Nick apologized to Harry for the problems this may cause him but the boy who lived refused to hear any of it since he felt it was totally worth it. "there's not much more they can do to me that I don't already have to deal with. I'll probably just not be given dinner again , it's fine I'm used to it." Harry said with a shrug and Nick came this close to going off in anger but restrained himself. It was one thing to read about the abuse Harry suffered from in a fictional story but this was Nick's actual world now and Harry was his friend so hearing this stoked his rage.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro
how and why will he replicate it
Nick had already figured out that he was in the world of harry potter with all the hints he's been given so far but he didn't remember the books mentioning a phenomena like this meaning that potion was likely WAY more valuable than he initially thought making him regret drinking it a little. 'One opportunity lost but I got another in exchange so no use crying over it , next is the crafting style.' Nick thought with a shrug. Carefully reaching over Nick grabbed the ticket with the roulette wheel drawn on it and taking a deep breath ripped it in two.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro
Perfect balance between merciless and merciful
where he was bored*
He battled regularly when he reached a point where he bored, because they weren't much of a challenge as he already had to control his strength and the instructor, the only man with good technical skills had become too monotonous to fight with. His almost 2-meter muscular frame looked tall and imposing when paired with the guards for combat and they subconsciously always held back, so he stopped with this training as it wasn't doing any good.
Asgard: God of Vengeance
Movies · 7rox
why was the mind art also in his brain
I looked around and soon found a mirror stand, and I tried looking at myself through it. I saw a pair of mysterious starry eyes that had the universe as the background, and I realized it was my own. I figured it was because of the gift that the formless entity granted him, and realized that I could innately use them. The information was just right there in my head, like it was some sort of instinct.
Asgard: God of Vengeance
Movies · 7rox
he has the 'eyes of truth' and it was the 'moment of truth'
Her magic was fluctuating, 'this never happened to the other mothers', she thought. She just hoped that her baby was fine like any mother would, and was prepared to perish if needed to deliver the child safely. As she was musing, she was pulled out from her thoughts when she felt pain in her abdomen and she knew that it was the moment of truth.
Asgard: God of Vengeance
Movies · 7rox
why is it not east,west,north,south
So, it turned out that there was a lake and a large circular island in the center of the city, and it was on the island in the lake where Octagram Academy was located. There were a total of 4 entrances to the academy area; the east gate, the west gate, the south gate, and the north gate.
The Unrecorded Extra
Fantasy · iLhamzki