Patrick_Ugabi

I think the baby mama stuff spoiled everything, how can u expect someone who hasn't healed from his own demons to feel okay fathering a child, especially from a woman with a toxic history n background, she can't help him heal or get better, and she's not making efforts to change. 2 blind people cannot help each other

Niceee

Thanks for the chap been waiting for ages bruh

Been a long time coming, that breakup Hope she isn't with child or not his at all Women and their stupid pride

He's ruining his own novel, a wonderful artistic work been turned into something unrecognisable They is no trill reading this anymore

Well it's a good chapter, long time coming. Just a respectful opinion, this dude's attitude has changed, a big turnover from how u portrayed him to be, he's 17 man, and ur making him feel like the world revolves around him, like he's better than everyone, they need him to win. I thought u were gonna take a break and fix that, but man it can't go on, those statistics needed teammates to accomplish, I thought his humble background would keep him grounded but man he's becoming toxic No disrespect, I love ur works but it's like we're moving backwards instead, he has a world class agent, surrounded by veterans, he should be learning from them, building his attitude not otherwise

I thought some of his equipments are system generated, how is it so easy to hack, it's becoming boring, too much problem at a time, it's bad for story progression, a challenge at a time We just had an occult and supernatural shinigam, baby mama problem, therapist. Just focus on one problem at a time

That isn't being selfish bruh, that's setting boundaries She's so into the lifestyle that it's hard to get out , and that Geoffrey dude, is he the boss or the employee, dude seems useless sometimes to me

Thanks for the chap

Seems great Looking forward to more