Definitely 50/50 so far You don't notice it that much Great job so far Can't wait for him to find out the type of world he's in
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For the director, Martin once again turned to the Wachowski Brothers—before they became sisters—knowing they were the right fit for the film's visionary style. Martin was committed to using as much of the original cast as possible, avoiding any surprises. However, there was one role he was eager to make his own decision on: the role of Neo.
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Thanks for the chap keep it coming
moreeeee
That's a great year of course, filled with opportunities Looking forward to more, I hope he stays a club and business owner, I've seen countless people try to make their club owners (MC) to be the club coach(thou I've only seen one novel succeed and I'm a huge fan of it, Millwall, maybe you could take some inspirations from it) Keep the chapters coming bro
Not many chapter so I can't really judge But it's got potential that I'm sure Grammar is good, maybe improve the pacings and text layout. I can't seem to grab what year it actually is, do tell me You're doing a great job 👍
Lots of potential looking forward to more
Just focus on being a club owner and exploring both the MCs life and the club journey. That was what expected, I've been following the previous author from his first, then second, until he decided to hand the project over omor eeh, Na whining so Why will a multi billionaire become a head coach, especially with little to no experience, what is he trying to prove, who would listen to him, just be the boss, focus both on the MC personal life and the club. But its your story, so good luck mate
Thanks
Let him leave They haven't shown even a little support for him Or even a bit of respect
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Sports · GxDesailly