you know when you expect something but it still surprises you .can't get the thought of Mia being the one to do it instead, feels novel
please do keep writing .after all the build up it'll be a shame to stop now .though it would suck if you stopped in the middle too
just don't Starve us too much will ya
so unexpected , amazing i want more
sweet I'm looking forward to it .i like that mage part ,feels unique without over doing anything.Kinda makes me wanna write my own book like this .But I know I Kinda suck right now
developing the dungeon and himself and finally get to scrapping with his hands .don't leave me with the idea of it alone and leaving the place .The starting characters need to have more impact on the story . Especially Muru ,give her a little more brains n power .let her take her role as his shield .The trader succubus can lead to interesting story lines also .if you gon leave any ,use them fully b4 it
just waiting for new chapters too
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moonfox considering he thinks his G will like it .
no of the above in the quiz
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original black thunder monarch rising
After his father to the hands of the azure lighting sect. who wanted a cultivation manual he possed . Frank escaped pursuit after his father's sacrifice. hungry for revenge he starts his rise in power to avenge his father's death with the sect and all participants. Using the fallen black lightning manual they killed him for .Frank sets to rise in the martial arts world but distrustful towards man. . . stay as he journeys the martial world to find it's mysteries while fighting adversity with little plot armour. . I'm new to writing so do forgive me if I suck too much. Also English isn't my base language so I will fuck up a lot of spellings and stuff ,I apologize in advance book should get better as I progress ,so there is little development in the first chapters of it . Feel free to criticize, curse and advise me . I welcome all thank you should you read my book .I'm so bored over here And warning I'm terrible at spellings so please forgive me. English is not my thing . hope you enjoy3 Chs 1 お気に入り
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has been cancelled
After his master died in the hands of the Azure lightning sect, Frank escaped to another another Continent to start his rise in power to avenge his masters death with the sect and all participants. using the fallen black lightning manual they killed him for ,Frank sets to rise in the martial arts world but distrustful towards man he grooms Demon beasts as his aides and companion in the journey taking the cultivation world a storm with his wits and battle power. . . stay as he journeys the martial world to find it's mysteries while fighting adversity with little plot armour. . I'm new to writing so do forgive me if I suck too much. Also English isn't my base language so I will fuck up a lot of spellings and stuff ,I apologize in advance book should get better as I progress ,so there is little development in the first chapters of it . Feel free to criticize, curse and advise me . I welcome all thank you should you read my book .I'm so bored over here just so you know I'm improvising the whole thing ryt now so ignore the plot holes *if u looking for some smut chapters I'm working towards it won't be much though*24 Chs 29 お気に入り
i just love the savagery of it all.
Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
Fantasy · Lonelythree