Custom_Avultis

LV 13

Lost person with no hope.

2021-04-18 入りました Global
バッジ 12

Moments 9
Custom_Avultis
Custom_Avultis
1 years ago
Posted

This novel is extremely cringy. I can't read anymore as it kills me to try. Please forgive my harshness but I only reviewed this because webnovel recommend it. [img=faceslap]

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Custom_Avultis
1 years ago
Commented

System!!! [img=faceslap]

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The Extra's Survival

The Extra's Survival

Fantasy · Mohitkumar

Custom_Avultis
Custom_Avultis
1 years ago
Commented

I really like your story so far! 😀 [img=update]

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Custom_Avultis
1 years ago
Posted

Authors POV? WTF, I can not even get past the prologue without cringing![img=faceslap]

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Custom_Avultis
2 years ago
Posted

The story is amazing, has a really good vibe throughout the story but at some point I got bored so I stopped reading around chapter 1719. The main reason I got bored is I felt a lot of Déjà vu as the story was getting more repetitive. Even though I dropped it for now I will probably finish it at some point. Would still recommend to a friend if they like Sci-fi and Fantasy Genres. Score 4.2 Writing Quality 3 Stars Stability of Updates 5 Stars Story Development 3 Stars Character Design 5 Stars World Background 5 Stars

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Custom_Avultis
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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Custom_Avultis
3 years ago
Posted

Good then bad. Read if you want context on the good then bad. This will always live on as a interesting story as long as I stop reading where I am. Just remember Ignorance is bliss.

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Custom_Avultis
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Custom_Avultis
Custom_Avultis
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon