Too Bad! But anyway, thank you for giving it a chance, I'm sorry for all the mistakes, English is not my first language and I don't have that much time to work on the story either, I'm glad you made it this far and I will consider your comments. Thank you.
"No," Skyler replied, looking at her hands as she rubbed them, "Only in the Bio-sphere, my brother was right. He told me that you seemed to have much more experience than me in combat."
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hmmmmm well it was an interesting read. there are actions scenes at the beginning of the story already. quite intriguing to. need to figure out more about the main character though. its still early to say anything about him
the synopsis got my attention. I think that's a good start. The story is still at the beginning phase and really need more for me to determine where it will go. But so far, its good. Good luck author
Hey man, thank you for continuous reading. Intensity it's a choice the user needs to apply. It is like muscular tension if he does not apply and effort the intensity will be at the normal rate. In the future more things will be explained about the intensity and the effects that it got in one body.
Dude, thank you so much for the review. I really really appreciate it. It means a lot to me. Er, regarding the cons... For the first con well no much to do. But I do try my best... Can't afford an editor yet hahaha. Will pay attention to it more still. But for the second it will be explained in the story why the treasure are especial and can't be done any more. Hope you continue liking the story!
thank dude. will double check
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thanks for the comments dude. I will need to get back on the corrections when I have more free time but I have already taken note of them. Really appreciate it
Ezequiel looked at Malcom, and his anger began to increase. Using his power, he created a rock dome that protected him.
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thank you let me double check
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Three thousand years ago. The seven most powerful magicians in the world, The Sacred Virtues, sealed the evil Four Horsemen by using the magic power of sixteen people. Three thousand years later. Humans continue to choose sixteen people who will sacrifice their magic to keep the evil sealed. Malcom is one of these ‘lucky’ people as soon as he was born. Because of being chosen as the bearer of the Mark, Malcom could only use a part of his magic. How could he then live normally when everything in the world requires magic to function? He was considered weak, thus became a social outcast. Tired of being mistreated and humiliated, Malcom fights to prove his true worth. But things get even more complicated when fanatical Horsemen worshiping fans begin kidnapping the Marked people like him… *** Author's Note: 3 chapters or more every Friday 100 Power Stones = +1 Extra ch/week 300 Power Stones = +2 Extra ch/week 700 Power Stones = +4 Extra ch/week 1000 Power Stones = +7 Extra ch/week Extra chapters will be published at the end of each week based on the power stones earned that week. Want to sponsor an extra chapter? Send a gift of 1000 coins and you will also get a shout out. Thank you!234 Chs 1.6k お気に入り
hahahahah I understand, it will only be a couple of chapters if I remember correctly there are 4 or 5 chapters from hers perspective and we return to Malcom, I needed to show some things about her family. I'm glad you find it annoying, that was the intention. If you continue reading, you may like what follows. Thank you.
"No," Skyler replied, looking at her hands as she rubbed them, "Only in the Bio-sphere, my brother was right. He told me that you seemed to have much more experience than me in combat."
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