My advice would be to make less use of the word "but"
"But I can't use Hedwig , he asked me not to contact him with her next time, I will have to use one of the school's owl." I explained.
Harry Potter : The Archmage Awakens
Book&Literature · Eternal97
could be? there is also a woman in mythology that is named Europa.
"Once things here are settled, my next stop will be Japan. I want to see who's scheming in the shadows. After that, I'll visit the branch office in Europa as well."
Marvel: Umbrella Corporation
Anime & Comics · ShadySmuggler
I liked it. It flowed well with the story. even if it was gross and it makes me want to throw up.
honestly, I like how you handled it this time way more than your last iteration of this chapter. I am not a critic nor a writer. But I have read a lot of stories on various. I can see you definitely improved as a writer.
i don't think he was an asshole in this. i mean isn't he right? She blackmailed him. That's a crime bro. he could have used better language, sure. but what gives this system the right to call him an asshole?
[-10 affection gained with Nadia (2/100)] (The system even agrees you were a total asshole in that moment.)
Hotd: Zombies!? I just got here...
Anime & Comics · Lone_Courier69
yes, I kinda agree. now that I have more time to think about it. but I still think that there is no need to change your surname.
"My name is Leon Alpenwind, a newly appointed Baron. And I was indeed an adventurer before I joined the academy."
This isn't High School DxD, damn it!
Anime & Comics · The_POZ
Europa is the name for Europe, used in italy. I think it's probably like that in a lot of other countries. Hope this helps.
"Once things here are settled, my next stop will be Japan. I want to see who's scheming in the shadows. After that, I'll visit the branch office in Europa as well."
Marvel: Umbrella Corporation
Anime & Comics · ShadySmuggler
isn't she older than him?
"You're that old? Oh! I mean..." - Embarrassed, Charlie covered her mouth with the palm of her hand, eliciting a short laugh from William.
Hazbin Hotel: Singed Wings
Anime & Comics · Kotvslape
"Somebody kill that faggot already...!" - The crocodile sinner didn't have time to finish, because he was blown away by a battering ram in a white shirt. A haughty smile, confident heavy movements, sharp and deadly blows delivered with fists, legs or strange techniques from sumo or karate... William was not strong in earthly martial arts, just for the sake of interest, having downloaded and supplemented the Knowledge Matrix of the Replicant of Truth with everything he could. The result...
Hazbin Hotel: Singed Wings
Anime & Comics · Kotvslape
what is this?
"A Blank Card," the White One murmured, his gaze lingering on the deck in his hand. He did not hesitate, swiftly gathering the cards together and placing them on the table. Without a word, the White One bowed and retreated into the darkness, leaving the rest alone with their thoughts.
Cyberpunk - The Fall of Icarus
Anime & Comics · FroggitDude