バッジ 7
Moments 1965
i don't get it does he use the advanced one or not?
ch 0 2 Neural Link Fabric & Automated Cultivation
A Farmer's Journey To Immortality
Eastern · Grayback
How do you plan to do this part mister 7 year old?
Research the Death Eaters, Supremist supporters, the corrupt, and the scum of the wizarding world in general. Like the ones doing everything in the dark like Lucius Malfoy, or the ones doing it outdoors like the werewolf Fenrir Greyback. And with no pity for them, they've had their second and even third chances... and if Dumbledore doesn't like it, he can go suck one;
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
then you can go back after vodemort is dead if you want.
'So that's it, I'm in the world of Harry Potter... Hmm, wait... I'm a wizard. I'm the same age as the main characters. And in 10 years, a war will start...'
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
I never got why people freak out about this. just go through school life normally while taking the appropriate precautions and you could even go to a different country. Your existence literally doesn't change the story even minimally. Stop with this misunderstood understanding of the butterfly effect in which your existence is the pivotal point of the universe and your breath changes space-time. Just go through your normal schooling and then have your parents move to America or France.
'So that's it, I'm in the world of Harry Potter... Hmm, wait... I'm a wizard. I'm the same age as the main characters. And in 10 years, a war will start...'
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
I use chatgpt, it's very handy for learning and proofreading. It will help your grammar tremendously.
Evaluate my fanfic with percentage, it will be easier to know if it is good or not. And depending on your evaluation, I'll know if it's worth continuing to use google translator or if it would be better for me to post in my native language (Portugues-Br).
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
I don't want to be mean. Your grammar in this particular chapter was quite bad, but it's not like you cannot improve. I hope to see your grammar improve as your story goes on. I use chatgpt as a learning tool and grammar fixer. maybe it could help you improve.
This is my first time writing, and I was wondering what the level of grammar and spelling is. But please R-Reader-San, be kind.
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
"here we are" would read better
And here we're, on a beautiful afternoon in this great England, in a neighborhood where we can hear birdsong, children arriving from school and leaving to play, neighbors gossiping, and a boy of about 7-years-old with his middle finger pointed at the sky ...
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
Above them, many birds were flying over Dressrosa as they observed what what happening. They had gotten information of a commotion and hurried here for some juicy news.
Fist Of Haki
Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne
because the sun shines even through clouds. and knights train outside.
The pressure the black-haired boy emanated was also alarming. Lord Stark recognized the presence of an experienced fighter and leader. Strangely, he couldn't make out other typical signs of that. No calloused hands from countless hours of practice in the yard No teint because of sunburn.
Harry's Multiversal Journey
Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine
He could also take over new Reno as well
Zane was just lucky that his level was still quite a bit higher than the missionaries, or else things could have ended up ugly. Angelica would finish healing the two City Councilmen, and when they were prepared to answer Zane's questions, he would discuss the business he originally had in mind with them, even if their numbers had been reduced by half.
Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
height*
"BEHEHEHEH Neh Neh, I blew him away didn't I?" I tall man with snot running down his nose laughed out. He stood at almost 350 cm length and had a beard.
Fist Of Haki
Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne
sorry for your wiring
Delayed chapter due to major causes, what cause? Well, my POWER WIRING EXPLODED!
Streamer in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
At this point you are starting to sound like kakashi. Did you also get lost on the road of life. ahahahah.
Delayed chapter due to major causes, what cause? Well, my POWER WIRING EXPLODED!
Streamer in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
That's not necessarily a good thing either. But it probably beats whatever this is.
This was Luke's least favorite thing about being reborn, being in an orphanage. In his past life, he had parents and was an only child. His parents were always on the road for work, so he had the whole house to himself and money to eat whatever he wanted or buy whatever novel, or manga he pleased.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07
Is this really how orphanages are nowadays? I mean this sounds like world war orphanages. This is not meant as rage bait i'm just curious. As anyone had the experience of living in an orphanage?
Life at the orphanage was not at all appealing. He shared a room with many noisy children, the facilities were falling apart and bordering on illegal. The food was scarce and tasted bad.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07
I guess he is an adrenaline junkie.
The bad thing was that he could not find other people with powers just like him. At first, he thought he might be in the Marvel Universe, but it was 2019, and he never saw news of alien attacks. Nor news of Iron Man, Spiderman, or any other famous superhero.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07
Bro even a normal 10 year old can lift a hammer. let alone a qi refining 10 year old.
While the artifact refining course at Tongxian Gate also required disciples to personally refine artifacts, Mo Hua, who had a weak constitution and couldn't even swing a hammer, was unable to do the basic forging, so the instructor didn't force him.
Immortality Through Array Formations
Eastern · Observing the Emptiness
What kind of veins does this little girl have to chug a grown man to death? Is there a medical student here? Can anyone tell me how much blood can you lose and still live? Sorry i just need calculations.
By the time the rescuers reached them, it was too late. More than half of Felix's blood was already donated to the child. The child was quickly brought to the hospital in order to treat the almost fatal stab wound.
Kampf
Anime & Comics · Income_Tax
Which caring words?
Alex felt a slight warmth in his heart upon hearing Mia's caring words.
Apocalypse: Infinite Supplies System
Sci-fi · AvalonEmber
I liked this story, i think you should chose whether you want dipper to be op or not. If he is op go the multiverse route and character development. if it's weak to strong make it about gravity falls, and maybe after a certain number of chapters have him go into the multiverse. These are just some silly basic ideas, you can use them or ignore them if you want.
ch 33 I'm sincerely sorry but it's necessary for the future
becoming Dipper in Gravity falls isn’t So bad ,is it??(rewriting)
Anime & Comics · Herohero