Why was this important detail, him having a twin brother, skipped in the previous chapter?
They were born from the same womb at the same time, and yet why were the heavens so unfair? Though he was born just minutes before his younger brother, the gap in talent between him and Yone was like the difference between heaven and earth.
Fantasy · Choka
His twin is a teenager yet he’s six?…
"It's you huh, my twin older brother." He raised his eyebrows, his expression returning to that of cold indifference. Tom lowered his head and looked at his own toes; this is his signature stance.
Fantasy · Choka
Sigh. Another novel. Hopefully this one doesn’t bite the dust like the rest of your works.
Wei Wushang
Eastern · EvilGrandpa
I share the same sentiments as black dark. Author, you’re doing a lot of telling without showing. Also, this story feels like it’s on fast forward. Reads like a summary. You should slow the pace a little. Cook your story a little bit with some built-up suspense. Show more engagements. Show us his interactions with the world. His state of mind is also strange considering he was just a student in his past life. He shouldn’t be having such willpower to dominate a heaven-defying treasure yet or at least he should “suffer” a little for it. Honestly, I like the premise but just slow down a little. Hope you take this with an open mind.
Thought this book was canned. Good to see.
Don’t be unfortunate. As you can see, it was a lighthearted observation. Not that serious
[DOES PLAYER WISH TO ACTIVATE CARD?]
Sports · Inkedbymoonlight
Yep, the stench of poison is lingering in the air.
He found himself questioning his motives for saving the girl, especially since it wasn't necessary. However, he couldn't bear the thought of leaving a task unfinished. Despite not needing to, he ultimately chose to save her.
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
Beautiful chapter
This guy is preaching 😂😂
Ning even wondered if the reason all cultivators were either batshit insane or incredibly stupid or both is that they were all a bunch of druggies and alcoholics. Since they started cultivation as children, they're never sober for a single moment afterward.
Eastern · Adelle_oo_
Does he know…?
Yang Yuanzi raised his chin proudly, saying, "Your master seized the position of the third peak's Peak Master with this sword technique. What do you think? I've only mastered twenty-seven of the sword movements and already I can sweep through those in the same realm. If within ten years, you achieve minor success, it will be a sign of exceptional comprehension."
I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
Eastern · Let me laugh