DaoistojZfIq

DaoistojZfIq

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DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Replied to TyrantTron335

he may have the power, but the flaw of the ring is that the user mc has to have the willpower and knowledge to use beyond a light show, it's like he can make something but because he has so little willpower all his stuff has the durability of a balloon about to his nails and pop

"Sorry, but that was a one time kind of thing until I have more Willpower." Replied the boy with a shrug.

Marvel : The Green Lantern Might

Marvel : The Green Lantern Might

Anime & Comics · irfane_mohamed_mou

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Replied to irfane_mohamed_mou

actually yes it does they have a boundary separate them since they have so many crossovers, so mc could go to dc universe

"That's for your superhero name: Wonder Woman." I reply casually, when the truth was that I was too lazy to change the design of Wonder Woman's original suit.

Marvel : The Green Lantern Might

Marvel : The Green Lantern Might

Anime & Comics · irfane_mohamed_mou

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Commented

honestly, I've given up at this point ; but I would like a mixture of PtoleomiaosII and the millennium from seed freedom they were the they only ships that can go to land air sea and space freely

Ryuk stood on the deck of his newly constructed Gundam carrier, gazing out at the vast expanse of ocean before him. The carrier, a marvel of engineering inspired by both Gundam Seed and Gundam 00, was his latest and most ambitious project. Built in a secure, hidden location deep beneath the ocean's surface, it was a fortress of solitude and strength, invisible to the prying eyes of the world above.

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Replied to kyle_medina

then you should have described it fully when you gave it to him because while Technopathy is a sub type of a larger whole it doesn't mean the person has that ability they could only have the tech part so again this is on you be more detailed with your descriptions because we your readers are not mind readers, you literally have to spell it out for us because that what Literature is your not a TV program we watch we read so be descriptive about everything

Kingpin, a massive figure of power and intimidation, was not alone. He had his personal guards and a few hired mercenaries, but Ryuk was prepared. With swift precision, Ryuk engaged in battle, using his close combat mastery to dispatch the guards and his technopath ability to disable their weapons.

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Replied to kyle_medina

there is nothing there at all. This needs to be addressed. You really need to stop this brief description and actually write in detail the world building, not this never this

One night, after a particularly successful raid on a notorious gang's hideout, Ryuk returned to his apartment, his bag filled with high-tech gadgets and stacks of cash. He laid everything out on the table, a grin spreading across his face as he thought about the possibilities.

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Replied to Professor_Light

all spare parts, units, and materials for the lot of them they have basically no armor or anything to help them survive, so they are basically death traps not worth using for spares or collectors

4. **RGM Unit (Uncommon) Support-type x5**

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Commented

honestly, I hate this he should not have been given the chance to meet them or interact until he built his first Gundam, which should have been his first mission before he is allowed to go on with the story at all

As the months passed, Ryuk's preparations intensified. He forged connections with key figures, including a certain genius billionaire, a super soldier, and a god of thunder. Together, they trained and planned, ready to defend New York against the impending Chitauri invasion.

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Commented

should be used as the demolition mission type or heavy ordinance fire support a good back up unit

3. **Verde Buster (Common) Grunt-type x3**

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Commented

great for the main unit all-around coverage and easily underestimated as a long-range unit only, can be used in Lan air sea and space easily, and has trans am system with surface to space lock on targeting a great unit to use as base for all others

2. **Zhange Dynames (Rare) Gunner-type**

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina

DaoistojZfIq
DaoistojZfIq
26 days ago
Commented

would use as spare parts to many unnecessary ornaments, not enough equipment best used a extra for a normal barbatos Gundam and the ornaments to melt down for more armor plates

1. **Ma Chao Barbatos (Hero) Melee-type**

Mech System in MCU

Mech System in MCU

Anime & Comics · kyle_medina